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for Eithos

by MonochromaticMadHatter

schedule November 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So glad I came back to this story and found it. I really adore it. The way other sentient species and cultures was presented is excellent. Even the side characters have wonderful depth and feel like each has a backstory. I'll have to check back occasionally for more chapters. 

Xoxo 

Robin

person Anon
schedule May 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So I've just spent the last day and a bit reading the whole story and can't wait for the next update. I'm loving the story so far and hope you update soon!
person Carmen
schedule November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this nkt too long ago, and I am only at chapter 25 but i skipped ahead to see the story is on holiday, i hope it continues soon because im sure i'll be done with it by tonight. I really love this story so far, i was at first put off because of the xeno but im so in love with this. Cant wait to read more!
person grace
schedule September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great character development world development, plot, and the relationship between the two main characters is well fleshed out. Ael is also the most adorable thing ever. Hoping to see more of the story soon!
person ehwen
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It bothers me a little how human Ael is. Seems like he should have more alien temperments. But, i guess it's cus he met Pyry when he was still young? I'm anxious to see if he's going to get violent as he ages. I'm also eager to know if the other eithos are as intelligent as him. The other chrectors are all so curious about eithos behavior; they should ask him more questions directly rather than just observe him. He's smart and has a great memory so I bet he could give them a lot more info about when he was young with other eithos. I love Pyry's charector. He's very well written. Looking forward to the next installment :).
person Lola
schedule May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like how Pyry has courage and protect ael, as for Stefan he is a awful person. I would like that they can get back to the Jungle and that they can teach more Jung eithos . I would Love more side stories about the eithos. Thank you dor your work.
person Asrodeia
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just. Wow. Ok, I found Eithos by hopping through some other authors' currently reading lists, and I am so happy at where I ended up. Everything is so detailed and nothing seems rushed. On top of that, you've created a wonderfully intriguing world complete with an interesting plot. To have accomplished all these things is no mean feat! I look forward to continuing on with the story!

Also, I have a question: why was Ael able to play tic-tac-toe in the dirt? Is there a noticeable enough difference in soil temperature that he would be able to see it? Or is it not loose dirt like I imagined, and instead hard packed enough for him to be able to feel it out?
person e2tavi
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn this story was really drawing me in! I can't wait to read more!
schedule March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I keep forgetting to email to ask to be out on your mailing list. I'm always happy when I stumble across this story and see more chapters. I love the characters and can't wait to see what happens. The sex is always yummy too. I enjoy the relationship building and the bookie. Very nice job. Xoxo Robin
person Anna
schedule March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
in chapter 24 when they were doing the test with the 2 glasses and 1 long glass, I was like "hey I just learned about that a week and to test it for phyc class". it's interesting that they used this test on the eithos it's so simple yet useful >,<.