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for Magical Sexy Soldier Silk

by TentacleFan

person Sai-Yami
schedule February 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow, this is a great story. I like how you have a plot to the sexiness. I noticed this story hasn't been updated in a while but I do hope you are still continuing it. I really would like to see what happens when Jiro meets Granite. Plus I think that sinless husband of hers is probably cheating on her. Why else is he not giving her affection. I also feel like there's going to be a love triangle or something with those three or maybe more. Who know, only you do. I also feel like her magical costume should of grown into her because if you think about her magical whatever it is she has would grown as she grows. I just thought her outfit would of been more fitting but sexy by now. And I do hope she get the hang of her powers again, it would be cool to see her fight and not end up failing. I don't know just my opinion. But I do love the story and would love to read more.

person Anonymous
schedule November 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is awesome story I love it. Hope to read more cause the plot is great and I can't wait to read what happens next. Also Granite is my favorite so far.

person RS
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter didn't really work that well. You should have shown us that she was a magically girl when she was younger. Have her have a dream of when she was fighting monsters, or make her wonder if her husband would be into her if he knew who she was.

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