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by Ollivander

person JayDee
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, quite hot in places, but you should aware that it is written in Second Person, not First Person. First Person would be "I am", Second is "you are" like this story, and third person "he, she or it is gettin' raped".

And fix the disclaimer or they'll delete it! They don't mess around :)
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.


Your disclaimer doesn't have all the parts we need to see. It can be worded however you like, as long as you have a clear "no resemblance" clause and say that it is a work of fiction. Examples would be: This is a work of fiction. This is a fictional story. We suggest this wording for the resemblance clause: Any resemblance to person(s) living or dead is purely coincidental.


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schedule July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story but stop saying gorgeous ass, just say ass