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by classicherrypoop

schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Tom recognizes Jamie. Is Jamie going to lie and say he's Jamie's brother or will he confess the truth?

I'm actually surprised when Tina ran the credit check on Jamie, she didn't get any information about his job. When I used to work in human resources, we used to fill out a wage verification form for any company that was checking on an employee who was applying for any type of loan such as a car loan, renting an apartment or condo, applying for a mortgage, etc. That would have gotten Jamie in pretty hot water I think since his boss would deny that a male Jamie Sander works for him, but tell her a female Jamie Sander works for him. lol

Which only goes to say Jamie got off easy! lol Pardon the pun. :)

Can't wait to see what happens next. I may have to cheat and check out the next chapter now. lol

But not before I catch up on Hinderance. :)
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Allison, I forgot to mention in my last review: I don't think Jeremy was being an ass; I think Jamie was being an ass. I can't believe he banged on Jeremy's door when Jeremy was in there with that girl.

Jeremy has been more than nice letting Jamie stay there and he's been letting Jamie borrow his car all the time. It's Jeremy's apartment, if he wants to have a girl over he should be able to and if he wants to screw her in his room he should be able to do that too. Of course they should try to be quiet just out of common courtesy and embarrassment. lol

Just wanted to stick in my two cents. :)
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Allison! I keep meaning to read your new story. I'll have to check it out this weekend. :)

So Scott's either going to go with it or back away, leaving him and Jamie frustrated. His reactions so far have really surprised me. Jamie must have really gotten into his head (not THAT head! lol), for him to be so ok with all the kissing they're doing. And more.

As far as Jamie's job, I'm looking forward to seeing if Sammy and Tom notice anything. It's good he said his 'brother' would be taking over since he will look the same except w/o a wig or makeup on.

Looking forward to the next chapter, Allison. :)
person staar
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
man o man Scoot needs to either like it or not and not cause himself problems here.... he is so undecided that it's funny !!!!! love the update see you soon
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I know what Scott's secret is!!!! He needs the rest of the day off b/c he writes gay porn for websites!! Yeah, that's it! lol

I was actually thinking that if Scott wanted to he could make a fuss and tell Jamie's boss. They could fire him for misrepresenting himself. Maybe. I'm not sure.

Hmm, what could Scott's secret be? He's married? He's married and he has to take care of his sick wife. He has kids that need him. I don't know, but I can't wait to find out!

Great chapter, Allison! :)
person lima
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.now Im dying to know his secret
person staar
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG he has secrets too !!!!!!!!!what are they....he has a kid, married, engaged, killer, drunk and so on....wow OMG I can't wait for your next update !!!!! your killing me here !!!! oh BTW so glad that he came clean, just that I'm still wrapping my head over I have secrets too here see you soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was great! Thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey Allison! I didn't have time to read last week's chapter so lucky me, I had two to catch up on! lol

I agree with Luther; I think Jamie should come clean to Scott. Because now Scott is even more confused than ever. Jamie tells him he doesn't want anything to do with him, yet he reaches out and kisses him. He's definitely sending mixed signals.

Ok, on to the latest chapter. :)
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Jamie has to tell Scott the truth. It's only fair to the guy. Then the guy will realize it's not him per se, it's b/c Jamie isn't a chick. lol

Not sure why Jeremy hasn't been talking to Jamie recently, maybe he's upset b/c Jamie wants to move out?

Looking forward to your next update, Allison. :) I may have to break down and look on your website for the next chapter. lol