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Well, I finally finished all the chapters I missed! I was up late, late, late last night; I had three chapters until I finished and I had to stay up and read them all! lol

I was surprised to read that Jeremy liked Jamie like that. I feel badly for him b/c Jamie only saw him as a friend. I sort of think this part was left hanging...what happened to their friendship? I think Jamie acts pretty self-centered a lot and when Jeremy was confessing his feelings for Jamie, all Jamie could do was to yell at him to get out. It hasn't been a picnic for Jeremy either and hearing Jamie talk about Scott all the time must have been torture. So I guess in my mind, they patch up their friendship, Jeremy finds a great girl or guy, and they all live happily ever after. Separately of course. lol :)

I was a bit surprised that the doctor let Jamie go after only a week in the hospital. I guess his thigh healed enough that he didn't need to keep it in a sling. And the whole sex thing - I can only imagine how much pain Jamie was in with his ribs hurt and his thigh and arm damaged...

Also, how could Jamie use the crutches if his arm was broken? Is that even possible? I'm just curious. Well, thank God he's alive and he didn't hurt anyone else. It was a really stupid thing for him to do. It's too bad his brand new car was totalled.

Oh, and I don't understand why Rhino wouldn't tell Luther (since they're seeing each other and they're friends, besides), that Jamie was in a bad car accident and he was in the hospital. And did anyone call Jamie's boss? Why didn't the people from work come and visit him? I thought that was really odd.

I really enjoyed the story, Allison. Thanks for putting the rest up on the site. :)

"It's just got a few bullet holes but it just adds character, right?" Omg, I was hysterical laughing at this! I was sitting in the parking lot waiting for my kid to ge out of driver's ed and I was just cracking up! Oh, you don't mind a few bullet holes, do you? lololol

Luther and Rhino are so cute when they're awkward around each other. I hope Luther goes to his party, but isn't Saturday the wedding? So Jamie couldn't go unless he's not going with Scott to the wedding...

Ok, on to the next chapter. :)

Allison! You're back!

I thought you stopped posting b/c the rest of the chapters were on your website. I'm glad I was wrong! :)

Now I have seven chapters to catch up on! lol

Love it! Interesting! At first though, I didn't know who Jamie's love interest would be. I even thought it was Jeremy. Well now I know that it's Scott. Well I'm not so sure yet with Luther. He does seem to like Jamie too. I like Luther and I hope he and Jamie would be really good friends and he'll have his own lover too because I really like Scott for Jamie. And I hope Jamie and Jeremw would make up already! Actually like all three of them to be Jamie's lover! haha. It's just so hard to choose. And oh, I've been to your website and read chapter 11 already. I'm really looking forward for next updates!

Oh I also wanted to say that Jeremy is actually my first choice for Jamie. But then Scott's just so sweet and understanding that it so hard to see him get hurt. If they could just all be together, all four of them, I would be more than greatful for that. Oh well, that's impossible anyway. Or not? haha

I'm sorry that Jamie and Jeremy are still at odds. I think Jamie was being a bit bitchy at Jeremy.

I was pleasantly surprised what Scott did to Jamie - and he wasn't grossed out by it! lol

Well jamie's friend is an ass !!!!! him and Scott don't know about that he is not really all in ok !!!! see trouble ahead but I hope not !!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!

Awww, no Jeremy in this chapter. :(

Jamie really needs to give Scott time to get used to all this new stuff he's experiencing. He can't just assume Scott's going to be ok with everything. It's confusing to him. He's never looked at another guy before and it's only b/c he really likes Jamie's personality that he is even considering this.

I wonder how long Sammy knew about Jamie?

Great chapter, Allison. I hope you're feeling better. :)

WOW I mean DAMN! all the lip worrying and let downs and the I'm in I'm out you'd think this was real life happening right now! I can totally feel both of their worries and hopes! Great update! Thank YOU for sharing! read ya laters!

Hope all goes well at work for him...can't wait to read that part of it.....Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!