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for Kennel Club

by DragonSong

person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the use of the wax and sticking candles in her that were lit. When she is at the zoo, can birds feed off of Christie? Like some sort of Parrot or something else? I still want to know if it's workable with an elephant think of what it could do with it's trunk. I loved the octopus you used too.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I agree with Trinket and like what she wrote in her review!!!! Way to go, Trinket!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I take that back! I like some of the ideas that Trinket had but not all of them. Oh, and this is fiction so anything goes in my book. I restate that Christie should never escape or find freedom but remain a pet whether it be her current owner or someone new who then may treat her like the princess she deserves to be treated as.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I nearly shit myself this was so entertaining!!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please give us a double update today and another one tomorrow! I get you.... Arf arf arf.... whoof....whoof... howl.... howl..... begs with big soulful brown puppy dog eyes.......
person Anon #2
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am drooling at the mouth wondering what Jake will do with Chrissy the next time he is alone with her. I bet he's not going to be nice considering she broke his nose and he threatened to skin her but I don't think he could get away with that or his friend and her master won't be happy with him.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Does this part mean Chrissy will be visting the lecher of a vet again? "Write up a perscription then, tell her

owner what he needs to do, in a few weeks she should be able to pump milk like a cow. Ill see to that personally. "

Oh, and when she looked in the mirror and saw her lip was split does that mean the upper part of her lip below her nose?
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am off to go watch the fireworks because our town is holding them tonight not on the 4th due to Hurricane coming up the coast. I guess I couldn't entice you to post chapter 9 before tomorrow..... sniffles.... pouts.... whines pitifully....
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is an Electric eel dangerous or deadly and does it really charge victims with electricty? What about Christy? Me bad.
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! Definitely a good read, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)