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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Um, me again.....
I enjoyed the pig and cow slaves getting revenge on Christie for stealing the center stage from them. I hope more pets get revenge on her in future chapters but not to the extent of causing her body mutilation like kitty boy tried.
I want to mention again that I think Christie is slowly facing what she is now and will soon have no memory of what her life used to be like. She is just a female mutt, a bitch in heat, who only wants to be with her mate Juno with whom she will be content and happy.
She's even resigned herself to the fact she can't speak or walk anymore only crawl like the bitch she is.
I enjoyed the pig and cow slaves getting revenge on Christie for stealing the center stage from them. I hope more pets get revenge on her in future chapters but not to the extent of causing her body mutilation like kitty boy tried.
I want to mention again that I think Christie is slowly facing what she is now and will soon have no memory of what her life used to be like. She is just a female mutt, a bitch in heat, who only wants to be with her mate Juno with whom she will be content and happy.
She's even resigned herself to the fact she can't speak or walk anymore only crawl like the bitch she is.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for reviewing multiple times like this but I really am having fun reading this story and Christie's adventures, LOL.
I have to admit that I love seeing Christie bound and helpless. I love her hanging in the air with her huge tits swinging. Thanks for delivering chapter after chapter even though I know Christie doesn't enjoy it too much.
Do you have as much fun playing with her as I do reading what you write?
I hope chapter 12 is extra long and can't wait to see what kind of booby traps you have set up for her as she runs into dead end after dead end in the maze trying to find a way out. Will there be a time limit, and will someone 'rescue' her if she can't find her way out? Oh, it was mentioned they had used the maze before but is this time different than the previous times they have used it? I hope this one is special just because it's Christie entering the maze.
I WILL BE STALKING AROUND ALL DAY WAITING TO SEE IF YOU POST THE MAZE CHAPTER. PLEASE DON'T DISAPPOINT ME. PLEASE DON'T........
I have to admit that I love seeing Christie bound and helpless. I love her hanging in the air with her huge tits swinging. Thanks for delivering chapter after chapter even though I know Christie doesn't enjoy it too much.
Do you have as much fun playing with her as I do reading what you write?
I hope chapter 12 is extra long and can't wait to see what kind of booby traps you have set up for her as she runs into dead end after dead end in the maze trying to find a way out. Will there be a time limit, and will someone 'rescue' her if she can't find her way out? Oh, it was mentioned they had used the maze before but is this time different than the previous times they have used it? I hope this one is special just because it's Christie entering the maze.
I WILL BE STALKING AROUND ALL DAY WAITING TO SEE IF YOU POST THE MAZE CHAPTER. PLEASE DON'T DISAPPOINT ME. PLEASE DON'T........
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear me, poor little Christie. She is really being put through the wringer but I rather like it.
Thank you for letting us know that the maze chapter will be coming up next. I wonder what awaits her.
I like Riley and was happy to see him and his brother again. I am glad he is alright and not broken.
Thank you for letting us know that the maze chapter will be coming up next. I wonder what awaits her.
I like Riley and was happy to see him and his brother again. I am glad he is alright and not broken.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just thought of something! Christie is becoming an addict! She is addicted to cum and it's her an aphrodisiac along with all kinds of beast cocks.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking why didn't Riley just yell for help and one of the Kennel Club members who checks on the livestock might have heard and come earlier then Christie wouldn't have been subjected to that shit, not that I didn't enjoy it because I did.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so... I just came across this one and read it to the last chapter...and.... my mind is blown. I thought I had an open mind, but I have definitely been challenged. Did I like it? Yes. Did it disturb me? Yes. Will I continue reading it? Definitely! Since some have left a lot of opinions on the direction of the story, I thought I'd throw mine in as well. As much as the torture and violence are a part of the story, I think some justice needs to be served to Mr. Kitty and some others. A major barn burning maybe? It is no longer entertaining when everything is one sided, me thinks. Also, I know there is no HEA in this story, but a peaceful life in the hands of a more thoughtful master (Riley, maybe) would be a balm to my soul. Of course, more torture is in order before that! By the way, you have some seriously good writing skills.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I agree with reviewer, Anon #3. I think maybe in the end (which should be a very long long long way off because I am way enjoying this too mcuh) that Christie ends up with Riley as her new Master/Owner and Juno as her mate plus Daniel lives with them. Riley somehow helps them all escape and they fun away far out in the country/mountains/somewhere isolated and they live in peace and are happy. Yeah, maybe a barn fire would be the way to go at the end and that's how they escape it could work as a smoke block for them to get away. Cat Boy has to go too. Would he really have cut Christie up like he said or Riley too?
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I do so wonder if the "climax" for Chrissy´s final immersion and addiction to feral breeding will be in the maze? The severity of her drenched orgasms would certainly devolve and rewire her brain into a melting pot of bliss since "rutting" an entire pack can last for days, if not for weeks! Along with a healthy source of nourishment too, coming from a tender but swollen teat of feral masculinity.
I do so wonder the sensation. Imagine Chrissy being put through a dark maze while told that from that day forth no human contact would ensue. That she would never see, hear or talk to a human being again, that there would only be her and the wolves.
With no one to halt or stop them before, when they find her, a "transformation" begins. Wolves don´t care for obedience, they care for submission. Wolves don´t listen to pleas, they listen to whines. Wolves don´t listen to reason, they listen to pleasure. Their purpose, to mate. Their training to her is their sex and she, their receptacle. Days, weeks, months. It doesn´t matter. It didn´t mattered since the day these beasts realized that Chrissy, a woman, no, a female brimming with fertility, presented herself as an exquisite pet to them and for the beasts, for the very wolf pack, it would be an insult not to irreversibly ravish her with feral orgasms. She is at home now. She is with her "men" and finally ensnared not to men, but to beasts.
And I just strayed off my original review, thank you very much. And I would have been an hypocrite if I didn´t mention the cat-boy, AKA: The fucker. It hit me hard, for personnal reasons, regarding his little scissor game. I must confess, I was this "close" of going, "fuck this, I´m out. Nope!" But then things sorted themselves but. I was still shivering nevertheless. Also, the cat is a very stupid pet if he doesn´t know that she, all of them, are being watched by "cameras". Alsooooo, I realized you said "them" and not her. So the maze may not be just for her?
I do so wonder the sensation. Imagine Chrissy being put through a dark maze while told that from that day forth no human contact would ensue. That she would never see, hear or talk to a human being again, that there would only be her and the wolves.
With no one to halt or stop them before, when they find her, a "transformation" begins. Wolves don´t care for obedience, they care for submission. Wolves don´t listen to pleas, they listen to whines. Wolves don´t listen to reason, they listen to pleasure. Their purpose, to mate. Their training to her is their sex and she, their receptacle. Days, weeks, months. It doesn´t matter. It didn´t mattered since the day these beasts realized that Chrissy, a woman, no, a female brimming with fertility, presented herself as an exquisite pet to them and for the beasts, for the very wolf pack, it would be an insult not to irreversibly ravish her with feral orgasms. She is at home now. She is with her "men" and finally ensnared not to men, but to beasts.
And I just strayed off my original review, thank you very much. And I would have been an hypocrite if I didn´t mention the cat-boy, AKA: The fucker. It hit me hard, for personnal reasons, regarding his little scissor game. I must confess, I was this "close" of going, "fuck this, I´m out. Nope!" But then things sorted themselves but. I was still shivering nevertheless. Also, the cat is a very stupid pet if he doesn´t know that she, all of them, are being watched by "cameras". Alsooooo, I realized you said "them" and not her. So the maze may not be just for her?
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've been trying to think of places Christie can visit with either her master or brother and have come up with these;
the Kennel Club Fitness Center or Gym (think of all the equipment they could use on her), Doggy Daycare Center exclusively for Kennel Club members, a Kennel Club Dog Training Facility, a Kennel Club pet store that sells supplies, food, and pets, sort of like Petsmart or Petco. Her master or Jake could take her camping and she could play with some more wilds animals like squirrels (imagine them feasting on her tits with their little hands and storing nuts in her pussy plus they could be small enough to climb around in her too), moles, deer, moose, etc. Oh, and a Doggy Bakery.
the Kennel Club Fitness Center or Gym (think of all the equipment they could use on her), Doggy Daycare Center exclusively for Kennel Club members, a Kennel Club Dog Training Facility, a Kennel Club pet store that sells supplies, food, and pets, sort of like Petsmart or Petco. Her master or Jake could take her camping and she could play with some more wilds animals like squirrels (imagine them feasting on her tits with their little hands and storing nuts in her pussy plus they could be small enough to climb around in her too), moles, deer, moose, etc. Oh, and a Doggy Bakery.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PS: While it's rare for me to write another review, I´ve decided to post another in sympathy to Anon #3. Mostly because you aren´t the only one. The Author wrote this, in an attempt to exact and I repeat, EXACT, this reaction. A foreplay gone horribly wrong, a stuff made of nightmares and to question human morality and its limits. And that limit has been broken a long time ago my dears, it´s been broken since first page because Christie never enjoyed it. Never. Body is there but the mind isn´t. And who the fuck would? While a fictional story, I can understand why some, if not all, are having mixed feelings about this. It´s not fun being "bullied" and that´s a soft term for what has been done here. And will this end badly? Yes, maybe it will. Will Christie make it? I don´t know. Will anyone make it? Once again, I don´t know. As I stated in my previous reviews, the key to their freedom lies in their masters and theirs masters are the animals. Not the so called "Club". Do you people have any idea how dangerous some of these animals are? Starting with chimps in terms of strenght? Christie had been in grave, but grave, danger since the very beggining and don´t get me started with Hyenas and big cats.
And the Author knew and the Author warned, it put everything right there in the summary while stating, "This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental." But now you know, now you feel what´s like to be her, to be Chrissy and it sure leaves a sour taste in the mouth doesn´t it? My point to you all, to you all reviewers and silent readers out there, is to think.
Do you stand? Or do you crawl? The human being is not above animals, it´s also one. Christie has but one chance, one chance. The men and woman of the Club, are paying heavy bucks to have her and gods knows how they are already throwing dogs at each other if anyone goes near her without permission. The tension is already there. Among them, hides someone sinister, maybe a former slave turned master, maybe someone with a pretty nasty vendetta or someone with just a few bucks to spare. Could be a man or woman, don´t care. OR, Christie could die at the end...Hell, Christie could even be a "Master" that decided to take some amnesia pills/hypnotism in an attempt to seek the "ultimate sexual thrill" by dehumanizing herself into becoming a fuck pet, including undergoing physical alterations, she could even have a safeword that switches her memory back and forth upon hearing. Have you guys ever thought of that? Infinite possibilities dear colleages. The point is, she could be a sick fuck for all we know.
It´s very interesting to see how some of you sided with the "masters" while others to the "pets". Amazing, since we are actually talking to each other.
And the Author knew and the Author warned, it put everything right there in the summary while stating, "This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental." But now you know, now you feel what´s like to be her, to be Chrissy and it sure leaves a sour taste in the mouth doesn´t it? My point to you all, to you all reviewers and silent readers out there, is to think.
Do you stand? Or do you crawl? The human being is not above animals, it´s also one. Christie has but one chance, one chance. The men and woman of the Club, are paying heavy bucks to have her and gods knows how they are already throwing dogs at each other if anyone goes near her without permission. The tension is already there. Among them, hides someone sinister, maybe a former slave turned master, maybe someone with a pretty nasty vendetta or someone with just a few bucks to spare. Could be a man or woman, don´t care. OR, Christie could die at the end...Hell, Christie could even be a "Master" that decided to take some amnesia pills/hypnotism in an attempt to seek the "ultimate sexual thrill" by dehumanizing herself into becoming a fuck pet, including undergoing physical alterations, she could even have a safeword that switches her memory back and forth upon hearing. Have you guys ever thought of that? Infinite possibilities dear colleages. The point is, she could be a sick fuck for all we know.
It´s very interesting to see how some of you sided with the "masters" while others to the "pets". Amazing, since we are actually talking to each other.