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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, keep churning out those updates.
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
dear
it is very good .. and dress part i love it so much
it is very good .. and dress part i love it so much
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
poor Conner , i had hoped that he would at least tried to act the part but it seems that no he is not...He is in for a lot of pain, hope he changes soon...the rest for me are ass*oles thinking he would take all in stride !!!!! see you soon :):)
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww I feel bad for Connor. I guess he lost his virginity during that rape?
He sure seems to develop quite the phobia of touch now. Hopefully he doesn't get depressive or even suicidal or something self-destructive…
He sure seems to develop quite the phobia of touch now. Hopefully he doesn't get depressive or even suicidal or something self-destructive…
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I like your story. Please don't let negative reviewers bother you and keep writing this story. They are ignorant. I am enjoying reading your story and I even read The Verlon too but it was much different. I like this one just as much. I like Connor very much too and his attitude.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked that Connor was able to talk back to his father. I didn't like it that even after what his dad did to him, he was expected to respect him.
Keep the update on.
Keep the update on.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Conner and his father are never going to get along..The dad for how he thinks he is superior, he's not , if he forgets where Conner was raised , the kid does not know anything about what he is..and the way dad did things are very wrong in Conners mind....His bonded ??? looks to be a good person but I hope he has a lot of patient to deal with Conner, really feel sorry for him...no one is on his side in this...BTW where is Conner's mom????? see you soon !!!!!!
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July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So how are you going to go with this. Another the Verlon where they turn him into an obedient fucktoy who is supposed to be just fine with his mate fucking anything the mate wants while treating him like a barely sentient bitch whipped brutalized and terrified until Stockholm kicks in and he is no longer a person just an obedient grateful pet forgetting he was once something much more than a captive pet with no rights ?
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read your comment about this story being similar to another one and I beg to differ. Connor here is not a slave, he's a submissive and while I couldn't read past the first chapter of the other story as I hate to read about a free man who's betrayed and made slave, here you made the whole environment natural and the situation is part of an everyday occurrence even if it's weird for the main character.
I like it so far and hope you continue.
I like it so far and hope you continue.
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July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
can not wait for more