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for Spiders and Snakes

by pseudocide335

schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad Isaac has finally told Omar about his disorder. I am so done with Vaughn and unfortunately the fact that Isaac is still with him is starting to make me not like Isaac. I am having a hard time respecting him for staying with Vaughn…I hope he ends it soon, and because he WANTS to, not because he discovers Vaughn cheating on him or something that gives Vaughn a pass for his shitty behavior. I'll be so sad if it's "oh, I broke up with him because he was cheating" as opposed to "I broke up with him because I deserve better". I want Isaac to rise above!!!!
person staar
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow another chapter !!!!!!! yes !!!!!! I thought you had finished it and left it half way...so glad to see more ....OMG pls. get rid of V. guy !!!! I like Omar better for him....see you soon!!!!
person snowleopard
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story. I also cheated and read the whole story over on FictionPress, LOL, because I couldn't wait.... me bad... LOL.

BTW, you are a fantastic writer with a great imagination and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!
person staar
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
new reader here !!!! loved it, i hope there is more to it....I hope he leaves his drug dealing boyfriend he is no good for him...see you soon hopefully !!!!!!!!!
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and enjoying the story… interesting that Wendy felt so compelled to point out that Omar is "not gay" and wouldn't be interested… a bit quick to point that out if you ask me!
person Bellerbie
schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Owwww I love your story.
=)
I hope it last long
person CJ
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read an older version of this story. I don't want to give anything away (and obviously I don't know what this version holds), but I really wished Vaughn had turned out differently. In some ways I felt he was the more interesting character, with more potential for development.
person Denzil
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story! It get's my feels, thank you so much for sharing it, I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Pupette
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like your story a lot, it's really interesting. I'm curious about the development of their relationship, and btw your portrayal of Vaughn is sooo good, I hate him :))
Really appreciate the fast updates, thanks.
person Kitteh
schedule June 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know anyone who isn't annoyed by their parents at least some of the time :D Omar is too adorable. The backroom really had this warehouse flair one sees in movies, I could almost hear the creepy background music :) Vaughn is such an asshole though.