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Oh noes. I don't think my heart can take much more!!! When it does BLOW UP I'm not sure I'll be ready when everything is out in the open! I feel so sad for Omar. Curse you Vaughn and your possesiveness!

yes oyes his a big chichenshit !!! can't believe that he did that .....well you know that maybe he just needs again to be scared crapless again....poor Omar he really does not deserve this...thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!

omg this story is so GOOD! I am dying for more! Your dialog is really well done, it flows naturally and is easy to read. Your characters and their develop is very good. I'm interested in everybody. I looooove Omar. I just want to hug Isaac. I keep waiting for Vaughn to beat the hell out of Isaac and the anticipation is killing me. I'm on edge every time they interact. This last chapter almost had me shouting at the computer screen. >.< I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Isacc almost had a melt down with that kill from Omar...man his friends should have just shut up about it!!! but they don't know that Isacc has the hots for Omar....ok still waiting for when Vaghan guy there fu*ks up again and hopefully Isacc has the guts to send him away !!!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!

With all that happened to him , he still stays with him...yep he really does have a lot of issues !!!!!!! please knock some sense into him ok !!!!!! poor Omar ex-wife druggie now Vauhgn the drug dealer !!!! BTW thank you for the update...I'll be waiting for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wish there was a like button on this story so i could super mega like this even harder then i do already these are the highlights of my weeks Like just when i think it can't get more twisted or vaughn keeps pulling dick moves on issac it's just shazam MOAR DRAMA ^^

Okies so fangorilliaing is over

Grammar wise I don't see any issues without the few bumps here and there.(I mean my grammar is shit so w.e)
buuuut...Pacing wise the story has a great flow and isn't without it's moments where attention isn't rapt the chapters aren't dreadfully long and they're simple and most of the plot along without it feeling systematical, predictable, or have the issues a lot have that it feels like rambling without moving the plot along at
to me you keep me at the edge every time Please continue I really am rooting for an ending that will leave me gob smacked lolol

also a BIG applause for having a love interest that isn't like fucking(and excuse the reference) fabio I really love omar's character and how you've painted him in this story

OMG he kissed him !!!!! I couldn't believe that but I wonder if Omar liked it !!!!!! Man the scene at Vaughn's house, I almost had a fit !!!! I thought Isaac was going to fall to his death there . You know that he needs to wake up and leave that shi*hole of a boyfriend !!!!!! Omar will be there to help... BTW thank you so much for the update, I'll be here waiting for the next one,,, you got me hooked here really bad !!!!!!!!!!! see you soon !!

GRRJYESAWHM YOU TEASING WOMAN YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
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I await the next chapter with baited breath.

I looooveeee this story in the way it makes me want Issac to dump drug boy and get with Omar~They'd be sooooooo sweet together!