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for Spiders and Snakes

by pseudocide335

person staar
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you lately how much I love Omar !!!!!!!!!! Thank you for Vahgan going away !!!!!!! Omar is going to have a tough time fixing him now ....and he will do it slowly...thanks for the update !!!!!!!
person ramblingrobin
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wish aff had notifications, I missed a couple chapters! I looove this story (I'm on ch 16 now) but it's killing me he still hasn't broken up with Vaughn! I'm so worried he's going to blow it with Omar!!! eep!
person ramblingrobin
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like Yolanda. I think she is going to be interesting. Also DAMMIT ISAAC! The suspense is killing me
person ramblingrobin
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW something awful was going to happen! Yikes, it's kind of a relief now that everything is out in the open. I hope Vaughn can get himself together, maybe this can be a wake up call for him. Omar is amazing, though. He is very good for Isaac. I love this story.
person staar
schedule August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well that last chapter wow I almost had a fit !!!! hope to God that he learned his lesson and starts to taking care of himself now...Vauhan really needs to just go away for a bit ok ...so he can get his act together....thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!
schedule August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally all caught up! *Sigh* Wow, it took Isaac getting shot for him to get a break from Vaughn…. and they STILL aren't officially broken up! Isaac may consider them over, but for all we know, Vaughn is sitting in jail thinking that when he gets out Isaac will forgive him and get back together! Agh!

Also, I really enjoyed all the sexy times with Omar…Obviously it will take awhile for them to get back to that, and I hope Isaac uses the time as a single person to HEAL and WAKE THE HELL UP about the fact that Vaughn WAS an abusive, controlling, horrible boyfriend.

Enjoying what you are writing very much despite all my eye rolls over Isaac haha
person RitsuOuO
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Isaac is making a mew friend, just what he needs. Hopefully she can give him some good advice with his "little" dilemma, lol. Thank you, I look forward to the next chapter!
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17- This story is really good. I've been following it for a while. I feel bad for Isaac, because he can't pull his shit together and break up with Vaughn, but he's just weak like that, easily persuaded. It's definitely going to blow up in his face eventually, and honestly, I feel worse for Omar, because he seems like a really sensitive guy, and I think this is going to hit him really hard.
person staar
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please he needs to come clean or at lest have the balls to break up with that Vaghun guy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omar does not deserve this !!!!!!! he should know by now that Omar is better than the other one !!!! make him do it !!!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon !!
person staar
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really liking Iassc now ok !!!! he is a piece of work !!!!! can't believe he lied to Omar that he broke up with Vauhan guy!!!!!! Shits going to hit the fan now and he'll posse both dumb dumb !!!!!! see you soon and thanks again for the update !!!!