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for Spiders and Snakes

by pseudocide335

schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah, nice resolution there, thank you. I'd love to see the extras you wrote! You should totally post them. Thank you, this was a great story with really human characters. I definitely think you could get this published.
schedule September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
THAT'S THE END?!?!?! Awwwww I'm sad. I really liked these two characters. I guess I don't know where it could have gone.

As much as I hated Vaughn, it would be cool to read about his prison life and what will probably happen between him and this Tony kid….

schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this is a really wonderful story, you really made the characters come alive with all their human faults. the last chapter tied everything together perfectly. thank you for sharing with us!
person staar
schedule September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so glad they are together and that his going to see a doctor for his problems....pls. tell me that Vaughn guy is gone !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!
schedule September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad this one is almost over, I've really enjoyed it! I don't like to read straight up PWP usually, and finding something that's got delicious smut AND a great plot is asking a lot sometimes. I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story, it's really been a great one. And I'm glad there's one more power exchange scene- I'm looking forward to that an awful lot...

Omar should totally talk to Nisha and Mick. Isaac would be righteously scandalized once he found out, but not after getting the best, most fulfilling sex of his life! What an amazing resource it would be, to have friends who were into kink! And this particular circle of friends seems very open, so I think Nisha and Mick would be more than happy to share tips with Omar. I would love to see a sequel to this, covering Isaac's continued recovery, and his and Omar's adventures as they explore the lighter side of BDSM together. As a writer myself, I know sometimes when you get to the last page, the character's story is told and the book closes on that world. But as a reader, I know the flip side of that: the rabid desire for MORE!!! from characters in a world you just can't get enough of. (And thusly FanFiction was born, heh...)
schedule September 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Hot sexy dom loving Omar!!!! I enjoyed this, it was sweet and hot at the same time :) I'm also glad to read Isaac is going back to work. All signs of progress
person katie
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. The sex scene was great but I am a little confused...did Omar..fist him? The whole "hand" this "hand" that got confusing haha. Anyways great chapter and can't wait for the next one.
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20- Oh... My. Fuh. Um... Yes. Thank you. That was really good. Wow. Breathing- I think I can remember how? Will there be more? Oh my.
person staar
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow !!!! this chapter was so hot !!! they are so good together , hope things are getting better..thanks you for the update and see you soon 1!!!!
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19- Thank you... This was great. Omar is a great person, Isaac is really lucky to have someone as awesome as Omar. We could all hope for such a good friend.