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June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I loved this one-shot your wrote. I was worried Shane really would hurt Taylor bad for a moment that's how good you write. I wish you could write a longer version of their story, like how they met, the situation with Taylor's father, etc. It' well written too! I love BDSM stories and recommend you read stories here on AFF by 2rainsong2.
I gave this a 5 star rating but because some jerk gave it a one star rating it only brought the rating up to three stars. I hate mean people like that!
I gave this a 5 star rating but because some jerk gave it a one star rating it only brought the rating up to three stars. I hate mean people like that!
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June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well written but i just can't get into a story with an explicitly and physically abusive relationship. Personally i hope you'll dial that back a bit moving forward because otherwise it looks as though you could write some really good dom/sub stories