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Oh, no I meant Jake not Jack........ but I am sure you knew that.....

I really loved reading Now See Here! and am already hooked on See if I care! You really have a special talent with your writing skills. I already can tell this one is going to be another hit and am anxiously awaiting for next week to come so I can read more.

Well actually i dont like the prequel much but I really like Lance so I enjoy reading the sequel. Keep up the good work.

I read the first part and now im reading the second part and enjoing it the same.brillient work.

Wynja!! Ya gotta update more!!! This story is so friggen' funny!

Lance and Perez at the beginning of the chapter - Bigfoot, the Biebs, omg. lol

And then Lance and O'Connor - "Are you cheating on me?", "I'm trying to, yeah." lol And then they took bets on why Mark and Jake were late. lol

This chapter was just perfect. I do feel badly for Lance; he has so many troubles with his family, I just wish he could tell Mark about it.

Oh, I noticed a typo: when Mark and Lance were having lunch and O'Connor came over, it was written: 'and it brought a grin to Jake's face.' You meant Lance's face, right?

Excellent chapter, Wynja! You always crack me up! :)

I love this! Lance and O'Conner would be so cute together, hahaha. It must happen! Thank you for sharing this, I enjoy your writings and look forward to the next chapter!

i am really glad to see this sequel. i am looking forward to reading how this date goes. i think it would be really cool if u wrote a side story about peter. someone to tame his character, stop him from being such a prick. it would be interesting if it was a bigger bully than he is. and he hates him in the the beginning...i would definitely read a story like that! but with regard to this story i cant wait to read more lance and o'connor banter. its the best! and please be liberal with the smut this time. thanks.

Wynja, I can't tell you how happy I am to see you continue this story. No pun intended!

The whole chapter just had me in hysterics. You have the best sense of humor I think of anyone I've read. You should quit your day job and go into comedy. Seriously. You are just so funny. :)

I wonder why Lance doesn't talk about his family problems. Mark's his best friend; why wouldn't he talk about his sister with Mark?

I can't wait for the next chapter and of course the 'outing' (lol), to the gay club with Lance, O'Connor and their 'dates' (snicker, snicker). :)

OMG your back. You just made my day/week/month. I am super excited that I had to review before I even read the chapter. Now I need to go back and reread Now See Here, so I can read the sequel. But really you made me very happy by writing a sequel.

Oh, I remember reading "Now See Here" and loved it but am going back to read it again to refresh my memory.

I have an idea that I will be hooked on this sequel!