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by wynja

person snowleopard
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Jake was up to date on his tetanus shot! I would hate to see him lose a finger!
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
chap 6 was really good. i liked the way mark stood up for himself as not being more gay or a woman. and i liked that he initiated the sex with jake. missed oconnor and lance though. waiting for more as always.
person staar
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You'll get tired of me saying it but they are so cute together.....I love it....you had me a little scared there, when they got that storm but glad all tired out fine...see you soon !!!!!!
person senti
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG a chapter full of my favorite characters XD
Btw dont worry and just write about whoever you want cause we will read and enjoy it anyway
person yuki
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW just WOW! This chapter was just too good! Thank u for reading our comments and please update soon.
person yuki
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW just WOW! This chapter was just too good! Thank u for reading our comments and please update soon.
person Mimi
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is just sooo smart and witty! Totally makes my Fridays honestly :-). Also the last line was the BEST!! Perfect! I really love how the entire story has a light and airy time to it but is definitely skin deep and poignant as well. So ya you are fabulous and please continue to be so! Thank you!
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well that was a good chapter. as always lance and o'connor are adorable. since u listen to our reviews id like to request that lance and o'connors next kiss result in an unexpected explosion of passion. i think that it would be nice to fast forward pass all the baby steps. waiting.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like them both but Lance & Oconner are really hot now and I want to see where it goes with them...So funny to read of them BTE Mark & Jack are cute together so haven't forgotten them Thanks BTW for the update see you soon I hope !!!!!!
person Lisa
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Wynja! Kitties are so cute!!! :) Have fun with him - they're the most fun when they are kittens. Once they grow up they're more independent.

Greg's an ass and I'm glad Mark was able to put him in his place. He should be fishing with the 'men'. lol

I'm continuing to love the banter between Lance and O'Connor. They are hysterical together. :)