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Omg, now Lance is going to feel guilty for not giving his sister more money or taking her in or something. Oh poor Lance. What a horrible thing to have happened to his family. I'm betting O'Connor will help him get through this. And of course Mark.

Thank u for upfate :D

What can I say... I had a few honest to goodness laughs reading this! I loved how easily they made laugh I mean we laugh a lot sometimes just because but others to I don't know make someone feel better but these are the ones that take you by surprise and your real laugh jumps out and you think "WOW REALLY?" It's like finding something new about yourself I guess. SO thank YOU for that really! Also Mark needs to remember that Jake's Mom is in her 70's and she was brought up VERY diffrently then him I am however glad that you made it so she's understanding at the very least. Poor Lance! I'm kinda glad he doesn't have to deal with his other live as far as his Mom and Sis go but I'm guessing that he'll become a new DAD before all is said and done? Anywho Thank YOU for updating and definatley looking forward to the next chapter! read ya laters!

This was so vute all of them together like that ....Jake's mom don't like her...what does she have against Mark !!!!!!!!!! and you leaving the story hanging like that OMG Lance's sister is dead!!! what happened ????? please please update soon to see what happens next ...I'll be waiting :):):)

im happy to see that lance is coming along in his acceptance of his feelings / attraction to oconnor. i was kinda hoping that the kiss with mark would have been electric, but i guess given the story so far its for the best it didnt happen. and i kinda wanted lance's kiss with jake to be something more. guess i just like the idea of threesomes / moresomes. but im glad that lance initiated the kiss with oconnor afterward. in shock about the sister. cant wait for next chapter.

Oh God, Wynja! The second to last chapter was so funny! Lance and O'Connor's banter just keeps getting funnier and funnier! :)

I don't know what Lance is going to do about the job offer though. It would be great if the company takes off, but he'll be leaving Mark. Even though Mark is independent and all, it's still nice to have your best friend at work who will always look out for you.

Ok, on to your latest chapter. :)

Mark and Jake are ALWAYS entertaining! As are Lance and O'Connor. :)

Mark is very brave though. I'd be a nervous wreck, not being able to see and a storm raining down on me, I would just be a mess. Greg was an asshole. Didn't he have any empathy? Could he imagine being on a boat in a raging storm and NOT BEING ABLE TO SEE WHAT WAS HAPPENING? Douchebag.

Excellent chapter, Wynja! :) I'm looking foward to the one next week now that I'm all caught up. lol

You cant imagine how much I love this story . Thank you for update and keep going :)

Ok sorry about my previous comment. Mark and Jake story isnt boring at all. Its just that I prefer to read about a couple that arent too lovey dovey! Thats it. Sorry again

I loved Now see Here! and am falling in love with See if I care! I am slightly offended you mentioned that people liked Lance/O'Connor more than Mark/Jake BECAUSE it's so not true!!!!! I am falling in love with Lance/O'Connor but adore Mark/Jake in this sequel just as much as I did falling in love with them in Now see Here!

I love both these couples!!!! It's not fair saying we like Lance/O'Connor more because I LOVE MARK/JAKE!!!!!! Lance/O'Connor are growing on me and I love learning more about them but could never dislike Mark/Jake.

Now See Here is were it all started................