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wynja i got a couple things to say to u. first off, u were a naughty naughty author! u had o'connors hands on lances pants button, and then had them interrupted. very very terrible tease. other than that, it was good as usual. i really like paul because of the way he handled mark and jake when they got out of the shower. he is too funny! i am a lil sad that lance will have so much responsibility at such a young age though. well if he wins anyway. and i am so looking forward to more action between lance and oconnor. hurry up and have them do the deed! and make it a detailed and flavorful lemon.

I hope that Lance realizes that he owes Mark an apology for the way he acted towards him and fix their relationship. And I'm glad that Mark realizes that he needs to talk to Jake.I believe that Jake will understands that it is to soon for Mark to think about having a family. Lance better realize how lucky he is to have support from his family and friends.

I still think Lance owes Marc an apology. I am dreading Mark and Jake's talk and hope Jake doesn't fight with and leave him over it. I think eventually Mark will want to adopt but only after him and Jake hopefully get legally married.

So sad to see Mark like that ////Lance what's his problem after being friends for so long now he acts like to hates Mark.....hope things get better for all of them....but they all need to start talking soon ..thanks for the update

Oh man, Wynja! What a clusterfuck! God I feel so badly for Lance and for Mark. Mark has no idea why Lance is so upset with him. I can't imagine the betrayal he felt when he realized that Lance was pretending not to be in the room when Mark called his name. Shit.

And Lance is keeping all this in and not talking to Mark about it. If he thinks that things will just blow over, he's wrong. It will get harder and harder to face Mark and talk to him until one day he'll realize he hasn't seen or talked to Mark in awhile. He can't let it get to that point. Neither can Mark. Mark also needs to confront Lance. They need to straighten this all out.

I can see why Lance was getting so upset -- what with everyone wanting to keep Tony. Tony is HIS nephew and people are just assuming he's not going to fight for custody. Personally I think Jake was being rather callous. He shouldn't have brought up the fact that Mark and he were talking about adopting Tony. It wasn't the time or the place.

Excellent chapter, Wynja! I just wish I didn't have to wait soooooooo long for a new chapter! lol

Have a great weekend! :)

Wow. I mean okay sorry for Lance but Mark doesn't deserve this... and Jake is kinda getting on my bad side

I know Lance is going through a real bad time right now but I seriously want to slap him in the face for hurting Mark that way. I really enjoying this newest chapter even though it was very sad at times.

Im kinda sure that in the end Mark and Jake will be Tonys parents but I preFer Lance as his father (or mother! Lol)
Thank u for update :)

Hey Wynja! How do you know the Spanish reviews are nice if you can't read them? hehe She could be saying all these horrible things...JUST KIDDING!!! I just thought it was funny. I never noticed a foreign review.

Ok, on to the chapter. Poor, poor pony pervert (ponyvert), Lance. All his guilt is coming out and all his anger at his mother and his sister, and of course it's much easier to be angry with someone (even if they're not alive), then deal with your guilt and sadness. O'Connor is a smart dude. He's going to be good for Lance; he'll be there for him. I hope Lance apologizes to Mark - Lance was just lashing out, he didn't mean anything by it. Lance will just have to tell Mark the truth as to why he never told him what was going on.

And of course Lance has to deal with his bitch of a drunk mother. I can't believe she was drunk and all set to take the baby with her.

Terrific chapter, Wynja! :) Have a great weekend!

oh my poor Lance , so sad.. he needs to talk to Mark, before Mark goes all apeshit that Lance is not taking to him...O'Conner is so good for him...Maybe they can keep the baby Tony....His mom is an ass ok !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Drunk dips hit that she os...Thank you for the update and see you next week !!!!! have a good one !!!!!!!!!!!! BTW so funny that someone reads your story and comments in spanish to you hahahahahha