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wynja i am very happy about the sex scene! and yes i will keep reading because now im waiting for lance to top. he he. and im also interested to see what will happen with jake and mark. really good banter as usual. loved the puns!

Loved the sex !!!!! now what;s up with Jake , if he wants kids that much well then just let Mark go ...Mark is hurting now and he should not be pushed into something he does not want !!!!!!! thanks and see you soon !!!!!!

I love Lance and O'Connor! I hope Mark and Jake can work things out soon. I hate seeing them like this.

Poor Mark.I feel bad for him :( BTW Thank u for the sex scene! But dont worry its not the only reason for us to read your great story. Blieve me :)

Wynja! I hope you're feeling better!!

To answer your question, I picture Lance topping first for sure. O'Connor's done both and being very new to this I would think there would be no way Lance would want anything near his butt. lol IMO

This was a great chapter! I'm dancing for joy now that Mark and Lance made up. :) Now if Jake and Mark can make up...at least Jake apologized but he really does need to think about what Mark said. If Jake really wants kids, this will be a big problem. Their relationship is doomed then. I don't see any way past this unless Mark miraculously changes his mind at some future date.

There were some very hysterical lines in the chapter that had me falling out of my chair. lol

"You never know where you'll be when homosexuality strikes."
"Who do we call, your parents?" "They would be glad to help."
"Don't worry about it, I had no idea either. Apparently I'm bi."
And the fluffy unicorn bit...these are such rofl lines! :)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Again, Wynja, I hope you're feeling better now. :)

definitely see lance bottoming the first time. he's too new to top.

I hate seeing Mark and Jake fight or be so unhappy. Please let them make up soon, it's breaking my heart.

I hope you feel better soon!

Thank u for update. I think Lance will be the bottom for the first time
and now my reason:because Lance is too sure that he will be the top! sorry for stupid reason! XD

the first time Lance will bottom so he can learn !!!!!!!! Mark feel sorry for him but he is to young to have a kid now hope Jake understands see you soon and thanks for the update !!!!

Oh man, the Smiths' were something else, weren't they? lol They had the NERVE to insult their hosts' son and his b/f AND Lance & O'Connor (even though they didn't know it at the time). I really like the comeback that Mark's dad made about how they raised their son and how it was technically THEIR fault that their son and Lance's sister died. That was fast thinking!

I'm glad that Lance feels comfortable now in his relationship with O'Connor. :) Love the way he stuck it to his mother that he never connected to girls - too bad she didn't get it. lol

I just want Lance to apologize to Mark - Lance doesn't even know that Mark knows he totally blew him off the day before. They need to get their bff friendship back.