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by wynja

person Pagan
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I LOVE these characters! If you decided to write stories about them until they were old and grey, that would be just fine with me, and I would read every one. Thanks for the update.
person staar
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so glad they got back together again so cute and Lance and O'Conner are a riot !!!! thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!
person sasuke
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story :)
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wynja this story is incredible. lovin when jake goes thug for mark. and the convo between mark and his dad had me laughing for a long time. i just love paul. eager for lance to top oconnor. hurry up with that! and i cant wait to see if mark accepts jake to be his husband. i get they r in love and all, but shouldnt mark have more sexual partners as a gay man b4 he gets married??? waitin.
person snowleopard
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Jake sort of saved Mark and now has proposed to him! I am not sure how Mark will handle it or what his answer will be but hope it's yes!!!!!

schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Jake!!!! Finally they're getting somewhere! :)

The scene with Mark and his dad when they were in the car was just priceless. I was cracking up! His father actually THOUGHT about what position Mark is in during sex????? lol And Mark's comeback was hysterical! Holy shit I was laughing my ass off. :)

Terrific chapter, Wynja! :)
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The talk around the breakfast table at the beginning of the chapter had me rolling on the floor! :) DILF! I LOVE it! lol

And the PTA: "That's where the crazy really starts." Shit that was funny! :)

I'm glad Mark and Lance are good again. I hope Mark's talk with Jake turns out well. =)

Mark is really going to miss Lance and vice-versa. I hope Lance is happy with the new job.

Great chapter, Wynja! :)
person droty
schedule September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First thank u for update .I really love this story but can u make some drama please?its too slice of life! I know im childish im sorry! XD
person snowleopard
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see Jake rescue Mark from a would be attacker, mugger or rapist. He could be his Knight in Shining Armor! ~ sighs ~
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I DID have a dirty mind, thinking those two were trying to do the nasty instead of putting together a crib. And OMG, I was in hysterics when Lance told O'Connor that he needs to create a video game that has to do with assembling furniture! Priceless! :)

Glad things turned out well for the two new lovebirds. lol ;)

My fingers are crossed for Mark and Jake now.

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