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Awe, I am going to miss Mark/Jake and Lance/O'Connor!I hope you write new stories with new characters that are just as fascinating. Maybe, you could eventually write one-shots per reader's requests like for someone's birthday featuring our favorite duos. By the way, I would love to see Jake let Peter-the-Prick have it for the way he treats Mark.

Hi, love your story and I love the guys. Connor is always so much fun and Jake and Mark's relationship is perfect. Not one more chapter, they can not end. We have a wedding, the companies launch, Marks mother going blind and Tony. Lots more. Thanks

I hope his sister was the biggest slut! lol For Lance's sake, of course. ;)

That was so smart of Mark to think of that! I'm wondering now if they should sort of stage something for the next visit to the courtroom. First I was thinking about Mark and Jake possibly giving each other a quick kiss or something and then the Smith's would probably say something negative and homophobic w/o realizing it, but it wouldn't matter if it was Mark and Jake. It would have to be Lance and O'Connor...hmmm, what could they do, walk into the courtroom hand-in-hand? The Smith's would have a field day and maybe the judge would then be more inclined to give custody to Lance.

Anyway...awesome chapter as always, Wynja! :)

Rock-paper-scissors! That's hysterical! lol Along with gingerbread man, lol.

Jake was so cute with the baby - he wanted to put the dirty diaper BACK ON Tony??? lol

The 'I love yous' between Lance and O'Connor were so sweet. I could definitely understand how O'Connor feels and how he would think that maybe one day Lance will get bored with him and go back to boobs, as he so eloquently put it. And speaking of boobs, that was a shocker what Sandra said! lol

Great chapter, Wynja! :)

ok GO START WRITING !!!!!! OK now the update was great hope he gets the kid !!!!!! thanks and see you soon !!!!!!!!!

Why are you reading this!?! Go finish the next chapter! NOW.
(Was that good?)
Thanks for the update. I'm always happy to see them.

"Just dying. Don't mind me." lol Poor Mark.

Mark's heightened sense of smell was definitely a good thing; if the apartment has mold in it that will have to be remediated. The price should plummet. lol

It is terrifying being left all alone with a baby for the first time. Lance handled is so well though. I think with both him and O'Connor, Tony will grow up to be healthy and happy and have an awesome sense of humor also. lol

I loooove your story but please after finishing this one write a new story with new characters :)

I think you should write special one-shots featuring Mark/Jake and O'Connor/Lance. One of the could be Jake and Mark getting married, then another going on their honeymoon and another adopting a child, and one moving into a new home to accommodate their growing family. I love Mark's parents too and would like to read a one-shot dealing with his mom loosing her eyesight and how she deals with it herself. I would also love to read another new story from you once this story is finished. Maybe, you could write one about a deaf person.

Omg, Wynja - you are ALWAYS making me crack up! lol

"The two fags in the garden are doing it all wrong."
"Family, O'Connor, O'Connor, family."
"They're going to have make-up sex."
"Our son deserves more than three fucks a night."
Uncle-daddy!

What a sense of humor you have, Wynja! I laugh from beginning to end with every chaper. :)

I'm thrilled that Mark said yes to Jake.

And Lance and O'Connor continue to amuse me. lol I know exactly what Lance was thinking when O'Connor said he'd stay the night. I remember when my first son was born and my ex-husband (well, of course he wasn't my ex at the time), went back to work after two weeks off. I was panicking! I had this little bundle of joy and I was in a panic b/c db (I call the ex douchebag now), went to work and I was left all alone with the baby. I was like, now what do I do???? lol

Great chapter, Wynja! As always, you keep me wanting more. :)