rate_review Reviews

I love the story. You are a good writer and your stories are very captivating. Never once lost interest and the characters are full of life.

Oh my goodness!  I had to comment on chapter five, because it is amazing!  The dialogue is absolutely perfect. I squeed so hard, I'm surprised I didn't busy a blood vessel or something. Anyway, this is wonderful. Xoxo Robin

I really enjoyed your story. Well done. Xoxo Robin

first off i love these stories! i love the characters, i am not even sure i can truly pick a favorite. tbh, i am stunned. i cant believe that its over. u cant just end it like that! im so depressed now. i need more of these guys. what am i gonna do now??? oh, and dont change a thing!

Oh, Wynja! I'm so sad this is over!!!! I absolutely LOVED these two stories! Your writing is so terrific and each chapter is so well written, I would never know you're not from the states. But I must say the best thing about all these chapters for both stories is the humor. You make me laugh continuously throughout each chapter. Lane and O'Connor are a pisser and Mark and Jake are a quick runner-up.

I will really miss these characters, Wynja, and your writing. You are a very talented author. :)

wow, just wow. the whole story was wonderful. you know, instead of re-writing why not do a separate story with Lance's pov (or anyone else's for that matter) and just make a note of witch chapter it would be or if it's just a random stand alone. I think it would be much easier on you and since you did such a great job with the writing there is really no need for a do over. Also, a mermaid type story sounds interesting.

Thanks for finishing this story!

I'll admit though I couldn't really get into the sequel. I loved the first one, Now see here! But sadly the pairing Lance & Andrew couldn't draw me in. I really liked the chemistry between Mark and Jake. But what disappointed me was the very lack of smex between those two. It was always like, and now we're getting to the love...but nope, scene change. Like dangling a carrot. Those two felt to me like an old married couple already. It's not that I demand smut all around. Plot is most important but some smexing can still spice it rather up.

So I'm being very honest here. But this doesn't mean I didn't like it at all. I wouldn't have read if it were so. I loved the dialogues for example. Lots of wordplay and I'm a sucker for that. In the end it's just that I looked really forward to this sequel and then my personal visions weren't met.

But I still hope to read more of you!

I would love to read a new fantasy story featuring mermen and m-preg! Awesome!

omg wynja! u have outdone urself. i love this story and this chapter (19). the inscription on the watch is just precious! cant wait for the next chap.

Oh man, that inscription had tears coming to my eyes too! That was such a beautiful thing to have inscribed!! :)

I just love the way their relationship and Lance and O'Connor's relationship is going. The four of them just play off their respective partners so well. All I do is chuckle throughout the chapters! :)

I'm going to be really sad to see the story come to an end, Wynja. I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the way you write, and your characters. You'll just have to do a sequel, especially if Lance is going to get custody of Tony. ;)

Oh, and vending machines carry pizza? Can we all say "Ewwww"? lol And will we ever find out why Peter-the-Prick is such a prick??? And the whole blind horror video game does sound very nightmarish. lol