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Is it going to be the POV of all of the men? I wouldn't mind seeing that.

I like that they will spend less time in campsite than the previous version. We move faster towards the heart of story which will take place in Alaska. Can't wait!

urgh omg i loved this soo much. when you said you were rewriting i was a little disappointed because i just wanted to know what was happening next and i already loved the story but damn this is better than i ever thought!! I really love it!! i hope you update soon!!

More, please, more?

Thank you for updating! I am finding myself enjoying reading this new version very much and can't wait to find out what other ones you have made from the original.

I still wish you had kept up the old version too though so I could compare them.

Oh, I hope that's not Caleb trying to get in on Alex's domain. Oooooooh, I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write faster :-)

Hi! I read your previous version of this story and liked that version so I decided to read the new one too. I like it for the most part but for some reason Alexander seems more cruel in this one to me. It makes me wonder how their story will play out and that keeps me reading. However, I would like to seem them verbally interact with one another more. I feel there's kind of a disconnect between the characters. Also the way she's already being brain washed without much effort or even time on his part feels like its happening a little to fast to me. He seems like he's rushing her into understanding her place but he's not really teaching her anything. He is mostly having sex and torturing her. At least that's how it appeared to me from the last chapter. Perhaps I'm wrong or I just misunderstood but was my impression. Also I look forward to reading about how Caleb plans to slowly introduce his bride to kink. Perhaps you might write as story about just Caleb and his bride. I would love to read that! Thank you for writing this story and I hope you keep it up.

I wish you would update soon!!

Please update soon! I wish you had left old version up too.

Wow. REALLY loved your 1st version. You did an EXCELLENT job. must admit that I am curious to read the revised story, but REALLY disappointed the original is no longer available. In the past I wanted to copy and paste the story in my files for later reading, even if internet is down. Hope you repost it, now got to go read the new version....:)