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for The Hunt

by DayDreamerPixie

person Anon
schedule February 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll come back to this story at some point. I enjoyed reading it so far but it's clearly not finished yet.
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!
person L
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update, please! I love this story! I want more!
person Welsi
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey :)
I absolutly love your story!!! It's amazing!!
I really hope you will continue writing and uploading it!
After the road trip chapter my mind started playing around with what could happen
if the other men or the other women get to meet Adriana. So i really hope to get the real deal soon!
Congrats on your story!
Kisses (or how you would say in my country), Bussis Welsi
person XDaisyLover
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while though. Are you going to continue this story? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thanks for the great writing on a site where you rarely find works of your caliber.
~Daisy
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of an update soon please?
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon. Can't wait to see what Alexander has in store for Kitten.
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!!
person Sarah
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am floored by your writing. You can edit!!! There were no obvious typos, you weren't afraid to use repetition as a tool (like bells or crack), but avoided using the same words for sexual descriptions to keep things interesting. Your writing is so hot you have my willful suspension of disbelief and you can do whatever you damn well please with it. Of course Kitten is submissive, what would it say about Master if he couldn't pick a good bride? I'm just really excited the story is recent because I can't wait to hear more from you!
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this. Please update soon. It's been a month since chapter 5. Please don't leave us waiting 6 months again. I can't take it!