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by DayDreamerPixie

person lele
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awesome work, Pixie. Thanks for this long chapter, can't wait till the girls are allowed to interact together. Being friends will make it easier for them. I have a funny feeling when the others join them, the other 'brides' might not like how well behave they are & not wanting to run. I hope Nathan's girl gets there alive.

I know you've mention how busy you are, but these updates are appreciated. Hope to hear from you soon. Your work is worth the wait. :)

person L
schedule December 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay!  An update!  I love it!  I can't wait to see Sugar and Kitten interact, I do hope they hit it off.  I also can't wait til the rest of the group arrives with their untamed brides, that will be something!  

It is nice to see how Alex is when Kitten isn't being punished, I do like their chemistry!  He is so much bigger than her, when she gets pregnant (if she already isn't), she is going to be huge!  

 

Can't wait for the next update, great to see more of this story!

person Anna
schedule December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I like this story you always make such good choices w/ your writing

schedule December 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter the most so far! I hope that you update soon.
person lele
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi. I am a fan of your work. This is such a great story. I know I've asked in the pass about the original story, I think you've said you'll post it again once this is done. I hope you still decided to to so, but I am honestly loving this version as well. Hope to hear from you soon and as is well with you.

person LiHL
schedule November 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I genuinely love this. And I've been checking for an update regularly so thank you for posting again. I'd love to read more. 

person mukamuka
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Im so glad you updated! The chapter was so good! I can't wait for the camp and the meeting with sugar! I'm liking how she's becoming more at ease with Alex. Great update!

person Anna
schedule September 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Good luck in school and at work! Great job on everything! (I mean it. Literally everything you've ever done, great job)

person dripping....great story
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is one of the better stories I've read on this site.  I would gladly add this to my library if I found it in a bookstore. The characters are wonderfully written and I find myself wishing I had and Alexander of my own.

person Anon
schedule August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love the new chapter.....time for chapter 8 please?!?!?!