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for One Last Chance

by timecap_cell

person Mona Thompson
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the beginning so far! Cant wait to read more!
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really good. i am not sure who the dominant one will be. by his nature nicholai seems dominant but luciano was able to floor him so i cant wait to see what the power dynamic will be. i hope u update regularly because i will be looking for it.
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Timecap!!!

I love your new story! I'm so happy you're still writing! :)

Nico is definitely not a kid you want to screw around with. lol

Ok, on to chapter two. :)
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the second chapter just as much as the first!

I really like Clay though and I know he's really going to be hurt when he finds out that Nico is boffing the new kid. Maybe the new kid and Clay could get together...lol. :)
person snowleopard
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I like this story and don't know how I missed it the first time you posted it. I hope Luciano can tame Nicholai before it's too late. I like Clay too and hope to see more of him.
person craftingmom
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this looks like an interesting beginning. Can't Wait to read more.