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for One Last Chance

by timecap_cell

schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Clay. He's going to get hurt. Especially if he sees Nico with Luciano.

I think in my last review I was wondering if Akira was talking about Clay or Luciano with the m&m's. Now I'm wondering if he was talking about Clay and HE has feelings for Clay. After all, Nico knows Akira only smiles when Clay's around (or talks...I forgot which one it was).
person staar
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Clay & Nic are cute together but not too much. hope you just understood what i said / Luc has change him a little bit....BTW thanks for the update !!!!!! see you soon again !!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW I'm starting to think that maybe Nico is better off with Clay and just hasn't fully realized it yet... I'm thinking that Luce is just going to be a great "friend" only.... But it was nice to read how things are starting to look up for Nico! Thank YOU for updating read ya laters!
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok i like clay 2. maybe a threesome!
person Lisa
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Timecap! :)

Luciano is really warming up to Nico. Nico has to learn not to lose his patience over everything kids say to him.

schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story! i feel like ive been waiting forever for an update. i hope luciano comes to the rescue to defend nicholai with the situation he is in. i love how he was there for him when he had no one else. i hope they get together. looking forward to their first kiss... hint hint.
person staar
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hope that Luciano can keep him safe now BTW love the story !!!!!
person staar
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if they'll get together, since Luc said that he has a girlfriend that he's to marry ??? nice update, I'll be waiting for more !!!!!!!!
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed chap 3. luciano is full of surprises. i wonder how things will progress from here given that luciano is so straight. nico doesnt seem like much of a charmer. i hope u manage to work in some hot sex between the two somehow. will be reading for updates.
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Luciano! He handled that so well; he wasn't afraid, he wasn't teary-eyed, and he still likes Nico. lol

I wonder what Nico's gonna come up with next. And whatever it is, I hope Clay doesn't find out; I think he'll be crushed.

Great chapter, Timecap! :)