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Wow, timecap, I haven't cried this hard reading something in a long time. :(

Clay's story is over and it breaks my heart b/c all he gave was love. He gave it freely and all he got back in return was heartache. I wish Akira could have been more of a friend to him, maybe then he wouldn't have felt so alone.

And now this is the perfect time for a sequel since Nico and Luciano are running away! (hint, hint)

I loved this story, timecap, just like I love all your other stories. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. :)

Oh my god that was amazing!!!

omg omg omg! i knew luc was a mafia kid. i feel so bad for him. i am thrilled about the sex scene between nico and luc. i knew clay was gonna walk in at some point. i love nico and luc so much but i love clay too. i wish clay would have just joined in. damn. i cant wait for the next chap. hurry up plz!

I've read - Between The Two, Third World, Divided By Zero, & now One Last Chance....Point is the reference in the first few paragraphs of Between The Two is about Clay & the Bell Tower, right? I literally cried after Ch. 9. Poor Clay! It breaks my heart! His story [Divided By Zero] was very emotional / angsty.

Wait, what? Why did he scream?

Oh God, poor Clay. He's had such a tough time with love and boys/men taking advangage of him. And now his heart just breaks a little bit each time he's with Nicholai it seems.

So now Nicholai knows that what was between him and Clay is definitely NOT the same as what's between him and Luciano.

Nicholai really needs to get Clay and his roommate (sorry, I forgot his name), together. Clay needs to forget about Nicholai; he'll never feel for him the way he feels for Luciano.

And Luciano - the son of a mafia boss. Holy shit - I definitely wasn't expecting THAT! lol

Great chapter, Timecap! :)

Mafia !!!! oh boy how is that going to be ...Clay had to see it man that was bad.....thanks and hope to see you soon again !!!!!

Clay certainly has a good friend in Nasir. Nasir was willing to beat up the school bully for Clay. Now that's friendship. :)

And Nikolai tried to be a friend to Luciano. I wonder why Luciano pushed him away. I'm so curious to find out what happened during that phone call. Why would Luciano's dads want to pull him out of the school? He pretty much just got there!

As usual timecap, you always leave me wanting more. :)

wow this story is just so awesome! i love it. such complexity. cant wait for more.

Luc should not have said that to him...it hurt him...but well you know up til now he has been really a bad one.....don't know about Clay he needs help, that is what I get from him Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!!!!

I'm seriously loving your story. There's just something about it and I'm already obsessed and super excited for more updates (hint hin nudge nudge) ;P I feel bad for Nico but I'm glad he's slowly changing. I can't wait to see what happens now if he'll go back to his old self or if Luciano will apologize. Thank you for this awesome story and keep up the amazing work!