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June 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really great story, like all your others. after 'Britney's Trance', i've been waiting for such a long time to read something new of yours and i'd just about given up hope until i happened to check and see that this gem was up not too long ago. not at all disappointing, and i eagerly await whatever you've got next. i was pretty impressed by the build-up to actual intercourse (spanning 3 chapters), and there were times when i suspected Beth to come up with other compromises for Luke, but the way the situations were handled were very hot! the ending was a pleasant twist, too. also, i love your writing style; personal, and not bloated. it was 'Eri and the Glory Hole' that first hooked me to your stories. like i said: can't wait to see what you come up with next
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June 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I want to see a part two with them having the baby and still having sex a few years later?
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June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just love your stuff! I hope you continue this or finish your other works!
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June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A great ending! Satisfying and tight! The mix of naughty and nice was very good! Realistic enough to handle the issue since it was not the easy way out... Ya now! ^.^ Looking forward to your other stories now! Keep it up! I'll be prowling around until the next one! U got urself a rabid fan!
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June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A great ending! Satisfying and tight! The mix of naughty and nice was very good! Realistic enough to handle the issue since it was not the easy way out... Ya now! ^.^ Looking forward to your other stories now! Keep it up! I'll be prowling around until the next one! U got urself a rabid fan!
Like u didn't notice! Lol!
Like u didn't notice! Lol!
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June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
As much as I've enjoyed this, I think that I should point out that it's scientifically, biologically impossible for an eight year old boy to produce sperm. They can have "dry" orgasms, but they can't physically ejaculate, because boys don't start producing sperm until they hit puberty.
Sorry if that sounds rude - I get that it's fiction you're writing here, but I just felt like I had to point it out.
As much as I've enjoyed this, I think that I should point out that it's scientifically, biologically impossible for an eight year old boy to produce sperm. They can have "dry" orgasms, but they can't physically ejaculate, because boys don't start producing sperm until they hit puberty.
Sorry if that sounds rude - I get that it's fiction you're writing here, but I just felt like I had to point it out.
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June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Her defenses are crumbling! Its a hot mix of innocence and depravity! Love it! I thought they were literally screwed for sure when Dad woke up! Awesome! Brings to mind so many naughty memories! Please do keep up! I wonder if this will become a habit or if ull turn it against them... Huh!
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June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh... Ure evil! That was incredibly hot and raw! Yup! Approve! Pregnant scare but unrepentant! Lol! Wanna see!!!
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June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And the little brat continues flirting w danger! I like him! This was a very sexy, hot chapter! Lovely piece! Looking forward for more. Her frustration is almost getting to me! Such fun!
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June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And the little brat continues flirting w danger! I like him! This was a very sexy, hot chapter! Lovely piece! Looking forward for more. Her frustration is almost getting to me! Such fun!