Will you ever write a sequel ? I loved this so much
Will you ever write a sequel ? I loved this so much
I'm ashamed that I never reviewed your stories before, and that I waited until - tragically - it seems that you've stopped posting (here, at least). I don't even know if you'll ever even see this review, but I just wanna say you were one of - if not THE - biggest inspirations for my pseudo-career as a smut writer. If not for your 'Eri and the Gloryhole', I wouldn't have been inspired to write quite a bit of stories, and I was so glad to have taken a chance and peek at your 'Originals' collection. This one remains my favorite of all fics; the buildup, sexual tension, realism, all played perfectly, and I still envy the skill to this day.
Thank you for all these amazing stories that I still reference after all these years, amnina-chan
Your story is one of my favorite stories. It's a pity that such a gifted author stopped writing straight shotacon stories.
My god! We need more
Wonderfully dirty, well-written story. I loved the buildup and tension throughout. The way you introduce the brother, and the way he gradually adds on bolder moves, is very effective. Before the later chapters where he speaks more, he comes off less 'human' and as more of a sex curse or force of nature! Even if an eight-year-old can't produce sperm, or technically shouldn't even have a sex drive at that age, none of those liberties matter. Luke is a demon. He is a little carnal imp, an eldrith horror, a pint-sized tentacle monster, and a possessing sex ghost.
As he ran the gauntlet from seemingly innocent pokes to working his way into his sister's clothes and groping her ever-more intimate parts, I couldn't stop reading. Beth's corruption, from reluctance to compromise to raging sex fiend to pregnant teen felt very real. Having her inhibitions drop and her boundaries pushed to the far corners kept the story well-paced and gripping.
I can't wait to relish the rest of your archive. Great stuff!
Amazing story! A real diamiind! Little boy with older sister, and yet impregnation! My favorite combo (and sadly very rare). I wouldn't mind to see more impregnation stories with young boys and older girls from you.