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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow just Wow. So much great writing I don't know how to say enough good about it. Keep the story going PLEASE!!!!
person Pedro butler
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Next please when's the next chapter there's been almost a two week gap8168
schedule November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey how do we know that this is a trick by Mike to get Max into position for a hand off to the Ghoul?
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So glad they are helping Mike instead of getting rid of him. Keep up the book. Best story on the web. THANKS
person paul
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
outstandingly brilliant what a twist and a great plot please keep them comming
person paul
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
fair play yet another brilliant read didn't see that coming cant wait for the next chapter many thanks
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Told you so, now the "trial" & repercussions begin. How will Lia & Rick react if they are not involved? What will Max do to Mike & his parents for revenge? And will there be more and better war beasties manufactured to take out the enemy knowing they have WMDs?
person slyfox
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the plot twist and can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well knowing your twisted mind we can only think that it is Mike. Could be someone behind him holding a weapon on him. If not then Mike will be dead before he can take another breath. Alice or Amy will kill him without even thinking about it. May also will kill him because of Carol.

Only you know the answer to that and you will tell us in your own time.

My only question is how was Hind gunships get into the US without setting off every early warning systems we have without connections with the military. Oh yes that is right the letter companies would be the ones behind the two attacks.

Let us know soon.