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January 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I think it was nice of Alice to change the DNA of Cynthia so that she can be the lost daughter of June/May and Max's sister. Do not know what it might cause in the future. We will have to see how you bring it about.
Nice to see them laying the groundwork with the FBI to be on their team or in the background if needed. Waiting to see who the bad guy is. How about the police commissioner or a judge in family court. They could be in league with each other. The judge sends the young children to detention homes for crimes that they make up and the commissioner sends them out of the coountry to buyers instead of jail and wipes out the records.
Another one could be leaders in the FBI, CIA, NSA or anyone of the letter companies. I never trusted them even when I worked for them in the jungles.
We will just have to wait to see where it is going. I agree with the others, either flush Joanne or wipe her memory of her past and put in new programming to make her the perfect wife to Gerald.
Need to end the BSDM though. When I see that part in the story I quickly read past it as I can not read it as the premise behind the story is that Max and the family is trying to save children and adult for abuse and yet you do two chapter about the abuse of Gerald by the hands of Joanne. Yes she is a bitch so either flush her or fix her like they have with everyone else who was abused. Maybe she was abused in her past and is taking it out on her family due to her being brainwashed as a child. Hint Hint. Could go that way witnh her.
Will be waiting for the next chapter and will be waiting for book 3 and 4.
Keep up the great work.
Nice to see them laying the groundwork with the FBI to be on their team or in the background if needed. Waiting to see who the bad guy is. How about the police commissioner or a judge in family court. They could be in league with each other. The judge sends the young children to detention homes for crimes that they make up and the commissioner sends them out of the coountry to buyers instead of jail and wipes out the records.
Another one could be leaders in the FBI, CIA, NSA or anyone of the letter companies. I never trusted them even when I worked for them in the jungles.
We will just have to wait to see where it is going. I agree with the others, either flush Joanne or wipe her memory of her past and put in new programming to make her the perfect wife to Gerald.
Need to end the BSDM though. When I see that part in the story I quickly read past it as I can not read it as the premise behind the story is that Max and the family is trying to save children and adult for abuse and yet you do two chapter about the abuse of Gerald by the hands of Joanne. Yes she is a bitch so either flush her or fix her like they have with everyone else who was abused. Maybe she was abused in her past and is taking it out on her family due to her being brainwashed as a child. Hint Hint. Could go that way witnh her.
Will be waiting for the next chapter and will be waiting for book 3 and 4.
Keep up the great work.
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great chapter Love how the story flows.
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January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great work
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January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope his sister is really his sister. I hope Legion and Alice didn't lie just to make him and May feel good. I don't think they could take the pain. Max and Alice working for the F.B.I. might add some more exciting chapters. Keep up the great writing and Have a great Day.
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January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it cant wait to see where you take this next, what a great read as always please keep them coming. many thanks
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January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter except for the Gerald/Joanne back story. personally I don't give a damn about her and think that she should be the first to go. As you know I'm not a fan of SDM at all. I like Gerald & Evan. If you can get rid of the slave asspect about them great, otherwise you could have them as #2 on the blood letting list.
It should be fun seeing Max form a Special Ops within the Alphabets that he can trust and who feel a trust and loyalty to him in return, that is if that's the route that you are going in.
Let's get on with finding out who is in charge of the group of slavers and if David is truly dead or not. Could be that he is incharge and that is why Cyndi wasn't killed or enslaved, he still does love his family. Just hasn't been advised yet that Max is Enemy #1.
Can hardly wait for next episode.
It should be fun seeing Max form a Special Ops within the Alphabets that he can trust and who feel a trust and loyalty to him in return, that is if that's the route that you are going in.
Let's get on with finding out who is in charge of the group of slavers and if David is truly dead or not. Could be that he is incharge and that is why Cyndi wasn't killed or enslaved, he still does love his family. Just hasn't been advised yet that Max is Enemy #1.
Can hardly wait for next episode.
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January 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this story is the best I had ever read by far the only thing that I have to bitch about is the amount of time that we have to wait for the next chapter but I suppose a story this good takes a little time to construct, even so next chapter please quickly. many thanks
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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.To bad it was not Max's father. At least his mother/aunt May says no matter what she is her daughter. Thanks again for the new chapter.
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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME !!!! Just what I've come to expect from you. Can't wait till the next chpt.
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January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow has been so long for an update. Great story