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March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
completely brilliant will never understand how you keep track and bring so many thing together but I am so greatful that you can never have I enjoyed reading anything as much as I enjoy this please keep them coming many thanks
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March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MAGUSFANG; Thanks for the new chapter. As always another great one. Please keep them coming.
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March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Little does Kara know that she has just greased her slide to hell with her own shit and Amy is just going to give her a gentle push, npt even a shove, to help her on her way. Only question is; does her posse go with her or do they have enough sense, finally, to bail out ahead of time. Guess Mrs. Smith is ging to need some smelling salts before this class is over.
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March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The Story keeps getting Better and BETTER. Thanks
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March 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Kara on the hunt now. How long before she becomes converted? The swat commander with a frying pan? Maybe the team will
have to become somewhat domesticated? Learn new skills like how to feed 200 hungry kids. That's harder than what they are trained for currently. New job skills. Love the closeness of the family. The school experiences should take several chapters at a minimum; not to mention some of the other things going on. LOVE IT!!
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have to become somewhat domesticated? Learn new skills like how to feed 200 hungry kids. That's harder than what they are trained for currently. New job skills. Love the closeness of the family. The school experiences should take several chapters at a minimum; not to mention some of the other things going on. LOVE IT!!
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March 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps on getting better and better cant explain just how much I look forward and enjoy the chapters thankyou so much what a delight
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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Again another great chapter. The cliffhanger Master is at it again, I love it Thanks
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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Sarah handles the news that May/June and Alice are robots and that Max is part cyborg. Getting interesting. Good leading into book 3.
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March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"Legion was very protective of these people, his hosts, his wards and they would find out just how protective, and just what he and the nanites were capable of and willing to do to protect this family; it would be some time before that revelation would come to light however." Looks like the nanites are going to play a much bigger part in this story!
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March 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Will be waiting for the wrap up chapter that will lead into the third book. Can only guess that the mysterious people belongs to either the NSA, CIA, Or one of the other alphabet companies that do not want anyone to know who they are. Guess we will find out soon enough. Worked with some of them and can tell you that they are crazy people.