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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Actually I think that the next chapter could have used this title as Kara lets into him ala Becca & her father.
Good chapter but now that you are winding 'GITG' down we need more details and less sex.
schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Seriously you have a gay teacher named Mr. Garrison? I love Tali and Jazz!
person paul
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter you have a knack of leaving us on the edge in at least three different places MORE PLEASE many thanks
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
GREAT thanks
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
BULLSEYE you did it again
person paul
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
cant believe how many twists and turns you put into this story and still manage to keep the readers on the edge to keep reading another brilliant chapter, has petra found her one oh I do hope so then she can move on from max and emma
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW so much for anticipating one thing and finding out something else. GREAT chapter.I cant believe how addicted to this story I have become. Please keep them coming THANKS
schedule March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Max sure knows how to manipulate people. Threats coercion and such are nothing to him. Keep it going Please
person paul
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
many thanks yet another excellent and enjoyable chapter to read hope to see another very soon
person rescue25
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH YES!! The feces is about to encounter the rotating wind generator!! And I think the school board in directly in front of it.
Black ops is about to become the "late".