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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Max continues to surprise me with his innate ability to get out of trouble with everything except his women. I love the direction of the story in giving more back story of the family newer members.
person Sly
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!!! Still not liking the idea of Rick being with anyone but Suzy, iffy even about the girls being naked around him.
schedule June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When is chapter three coming out. I keep checking everyday and do not see it. Am also awaiting the sixth chapter of Northstar. Please release them as soon as possible. Love your stories.
schedule June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As always a great story with a cliffhanger ending chapter. A worthy continuation of The Boy In the Grass. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great plot and character development. Worthy of 10 out of ten STARS.
person jelad
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this site is a little difficult to navigate but I think I am getting it, thanks for answering my questions about after the battle. I thought the story was well written and it seemed to flow pretty good to me. looking forward to the next one please keep them coming.
person COJimmyV
schedule June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love those new Northstar story, I'm jonesing bad for Chapter 2 of GITG. I keep checking every few hours. Dammit man, you've turned me into an addict!
person COJimmyV
schedule June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OUTSTANDING! Although I almost miss this chapter being a cliffhanger. Your writing and description, even the minute details, get better and better. Nice touch with Marge and May getting married. A double wedding, perhaps? And I look forward to Max's interactions with Nadi. I have the feeling you'll handle that beautifully.
person Sly
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always!!! I don't thin you should put Rick with May and Marge... Putting Suzy with them is ok but not him... Did Max, Emma, Stella, and Carol ever get together??? Since Stella wanted to give Max and ride...
person RESCUE25
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffhanger. Guess this answers my previous question as it does seem to pick up where bitg leaves off. Have to go back because I lost some of the current characters. The damn spam fighter is ROUGH on my old eyes
person nuguy2006
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know! You gave it a new name, but it's still a continuation of the other stories.
I think it just keeps getting better and better. I believe that you could edit out the underage sex, compile all the chapters to make it a best selling novel.
Keep up the good work.
Nuguy2006