rate_review Reviews

I love both series I didn't know how to work this website and though you had stopped writing
My opinion
I think Emma needs to stfu crying and I would love it if max loved nadi more than Emma

But all in all
1. Fuck my opinion
2. Do you
3. I'm hooked, please keep writing

As I said before you are a master story teller. How is she going to find Mas? Comms from the bike to Red?
I think you know where you want to go and are just deciding what road to take.
You fns are waiting impatiently.

B

love this story haven't read any better but why is becca always at the front when I concerns max that should be emma his true love shouldn't it other than that fantastic

While Chapter 4 is yet another aggravating cliffhanger, it's also some of your best work. Bringing deep emotions to speech can be a difficult task and I thought it was handled very well. You also allowed us to clearly see several different points of view....another difficult task. Great job! Can't wait to see where this goes next.

This is not a cliffhanger it goes over the cliff. Please don't let Max wreck! Need the next chapter even quicker than ant of the other 60some.

B

For all of you other fans of Magusfang's work (like me!), I thought I would let you know and post a link (with Magusfang's and the admin/moderator's permissions) to the forum thread where you can contact him with your thoughts and reviews! It is free to register (here on the archive side as well as the forum side) but not required to post comments and reviews for the authors on this site!
So, please let him know what you think so I'm not the only one? LOL

Magusfang's Corner thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/56684-magusfangs-corner/#entry353862

one of the best so far. it sets up so many questions. I can't wait to read what happens next. keep them coming please.

I agree with sly on the matter of Rick, he shouldnt be with max's girls....maybe just marge and may if you want to head in that direction. Also sorry to see that you were banned from xnxx for such a stupid reason.

great story still you have a talent surpassed by none but I thought becca was not a permanent thing but she seems to get more footage than emma

WOW! The power of flashbacks. Seems everyone has a dark past. Please keep going. Two powerful series and writing on the fly!! DAMN!! At the point of being repitious (sp) MORE MORE MORE! Quickly please.

B