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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting storyline by a well written author. Hard to wait between installments but worth the wait.
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
withdrawal pains help please post a new chapter
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, you done did it again, whetted our appetite, and left us begging for more. Truly sadistic, and we all love it. Hopefully the girls will understand that not even Max knows about Nadi's little one, and hadn't planned for it. Seems like he's always off working to keep them safe while the girls stay home and play, oh well, maybe he'll get a little from them when he gets back. Hope you had a great holiday, and this chapter was desperately waited for. Thank you again, and we eagerly await more. BigMan7307
person jelad
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
just read chapter 10 of GITG and loved it. we've had a couple of chp. of hearts and flowers {which I like}but I thank it's time for some action. know more people know about Max which can be dangerous for the family. keep the stories coming I am addicted to them. P.S. just my opinion I would like to see some Max and Amy time otherwise great stories please don't stop.




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person rescue25
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A hell of a twist!! You never cease to amaze. As always waiting on the next chapter. It seems Max is on the verge of several
amazing discoveries. You had time to rest soooo MORE NOW!

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person flexy68
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was an even more intense than was ever expected! Yes I will say it again, you Sir are a truly talented writer and we again await the next chapter!!!
person flexy68
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait!
The authenticity to your stories really is impressive! You must have one hell of an imagination or have had one VERY interesting life!!!
Please keep them coming!!!
person paul
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
what can I say but another brilliant chapter cant wait for the next
person RESCUE25
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OK another hanger - just not a cliff. Thanks for posting. We could be pushy and ask another two chapters right away BUT another in a day or so would be nice. As always you have found another twist to take. You need tomgive YOUR harem some of the love that you write about. WE are hooked and waiting to e reeled in a little furrther.

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person RESCUE25
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
THANKS for letting us know the girls got there OK. Was worried when they took the van and were so tired. Been there - done that -
No fun!. You keep landing in the hospital is not helping YOUR girls shopping money. Been gone for 3 days and only one chapter up.
Was hoping for more. Next chapter should be interesting! What with the apologies.

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