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Hey Magus! Are you and the family ok? It is worrying because we have not heard from you in awhile.

WOW I need a new chapter. Seems like forever since 12 got here. thx

magusfang are you still with us? drop us a note just to let us know

Hi Magus, hope that you and the family are ok bossman? Long time no read. I wonder Chapter 13 is not posted yet because of the path you want to send Max on! I thought he would have taken the high road at the end of Chapter 12. I still feel that what Max is feeling should by the whole family so they can deal with his demons. I tend to agree with some of what futalov10 wrote because the only time I appreciated Emma was when she took the twins to school and acted like a "mother" to them. But, I like Emma from the beginning of the story. C'mon Magus new chapter needed, please! What I am going to have to do is reread BITG for the umpteenth time. I am following 2 authors, both of whom are on go very very very slow at the moment!

Just want to say I really enjoy your store and like every one else I am impatiently waiting for the next chapter. There are some parts of the story I skip over, but the core of the story is awesome. I am very much interested to see how the church fits in to all this.. max must be careful and not trust the church they have a winning track record of praising you one moment and cursafying you the next. with that being said. I have to admit I am sad to see Nadi give her self over to Emma and Becca and has made her self a slave or a part of that click. I was hoping she would become his and his alone. The one to watch out for and take care and put max first, to be his shield to stand quietly at his side and watch his back. I mean the others have there partners the moms have each other Alice has Amy, Emma has Becca At this moment Max stands alone. Emma was supposed to be that person,she is supposed to be his soon to be wife. I am sad to say she dose not have strength of charter or will to be that person. As Megarton Likes to say " I am made of sterner stuff LOL " Nadi other than Alice is that person. Her life Experiences have forged her in to that perfect person. Max will Need a person with her strength to be there for him because the others will not have shared and seen the hells he will have to go through on his quest. Nadi has seen and has lived that hell most of her life.
For example she was the first one to see his need and go hunting for him. the first one to defend him agents the others.. Loyalty is very important to me as a person, so I can say I am a big Nadi Fan. She a mere slave and the newest person in the group has seen the true heart of Max, and has dedicated her to self him. Where the others have gone astray or have forgotten his sacrifices for all of them, they need not but look at him and see the prof of his love and devotion to them, and the tip of man that he is becoming, for it is written all over his body, heart and mind.

Thank you for lessoning to my soap box. lol and keep writing

so glade you posted a new chapter, I wasn't sure if I was gonna make it much longer. it was well worth the wait, the chapter is on of my favorites and it seems to resolve some questions and hints at new ones. I hope all is well in the real world.

FINALLY! Another chapter. This is an interesting backfill but I suspect it is more of a place keeper based on your previous remarks about researching “the church”. You really keep us on edge.

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Hi Magus, while waiting for your new chapter, a wait which is killing me by the way, I have re-read BITG a few times a few times and would like to make a suggestion. I believe that Max should get some martial arts training which he can download and practice in the virtual world. All of them should, actually.

where are you seems so long since one of your stories have been updated with a new chapter hope you are ok and maybe just been busy hope to see another chapter on your stories soon

Hi Magus

I always found it strange that Max did not receive counselling after he was raped and almost killed in the jail. The family and the Judge slipped up there. Otherwise he will continue to be in this dark place. Magus, the last update was 12th July. I am getting ready to read the omnibus chapter! I love this story but, and I hope I am wrong, I only see death in Max future. Too much people knows the family's secret!