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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW Talk about a cliffhanger !!! You can feel the bullets and hear the gunfire. Max needs to live and help raise his kids. KEEP up the great writing. Thx thrfngerjck
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter I did not expect! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Hope it is not the last one!
person Bigdawg
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Emma and Becca should run away together and have Max stay with Nadi. She knows more of what's happening to him.
person bubbareed
schedule September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to find out where the story goes from here. Awesome job man.
person paul
schedule August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great to have you back writing and producing another brilliant chapter, cant wait for the next one so please do it quickly.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Happy days are here again! Glad that you have everything sorted out Magus! Now the chapters should just keep coming and coming............ Thanks very much. Boy, was I so glad when I saw that GITG was updated last night!
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When is the next chapter coming out. Have not heard from you on any of your stories in almost two months.
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi Magus, Chapter 13 seems to be giving you a warm time! If you are not ill, and I hope that you are not, just run something by your loyal fans if you have to. Anyone of us would be pleased to assist if we can. Personally, I wish to see how the story ends and the twists and turns getting there! I also want to see you complete the other stories you started. Please do not leave us hanging!

person Anon
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi Magus, Chapter 13 seems to be giving you a warm time! If you are not ill, and I hope that you are not, just run something by your loyal fans if you have to. Anyone of us would be pleased to assist if we can. Personally, I wish to see how the story ends and the twists and turns getting there! I also want to see you complete the other stories you started. Please do not leave us hanging!

schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more