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Magus, u r da bomb! Max and his family of avenging angels had better steer clear on Interpol!

Yet again this author has left us with a Clifford hanger. But as much as I don't have the patience for them, I have to admit that the whole series is getting better.The characters are a lot more believable, not so much black and white but varying shades of grey. As for the story line the church being the bad guys, well a rotten core of them. That really did come from the left field.Overall I think this series is getting better and better.

Congratulations Magusfang on a job well done. And please don't stop

Great chapter. Just remember that if you rebuild RED to include puncture resistant tires. That way the whole car will be bullet proof. Can not wait to see what type of airplane he has designed to take all the girls with him to Canada. Kick ass in the next chapter. Will be waiting for its release. Will also be waiting for the release of new chapters for the other two stories.

God the story keeps getting better. Keep writing stories like this and I will read them again and again. THX Magusfang

love reading this story it such a pleasure every time you post a chapter and there is where we have a problem could I please request that the chapter are a bit closer together many thanks. also love your other two stories could use another dose of those as well please.

I hope that Max is OK but if he gets out of this alive he really needs to see a shrink in the worst possible! He sounds as if he doesn't mind dying!

Finished reading this chapter and will wait for the next one to be written. Only errors that I can fine in this one is that the car is bullet proof (keflar in the body, bullet proof glass) but standard tires. Come on standard tires not puncture proof. They do make them and they use them to protect the passengers. Also this car can start itself, drive itself and can go stelth. So how could a van of armed men approach this car and knock it off the road. The car could send a signal to the van's computer and shut it down. Also how did the pepole know where the girls were. The only ones that know where they were wea the family and I do not think that they would do anything to endanger the girls or Max. Also he never said that Max died. At the end of the chapter all that was written was that he was waiting for the bullets to hit him when he heard some popping sound and then it went dark.

I hope that this is just a one off occurrence and not something organised. Otherwise the whole family could be in danger. I really can't wait to see the path Magus is going make Max walk!

Oh my god!

Before anyone complains how this chapter ends read the title and trust magus knows what he is doing I for one can't Wit to see what twisted path he is going to take us on. Keep up the good work magus. You are a fantastic writer. Just started reading northward today can't put it down on Chapter 7 already. Love your work.