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for Girls In The Grass

by Magusfang

schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter!
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dear Magus glad u posted yesterday.I hope I get next part soon
Regards,
Danish
person paul
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter cant wait for the next many thanks
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW another great chapter. I believe you are a very talented writer. please keep them coming. Thanks for tor great story.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have followed the story for some time now, even when it didn't originate on this site. It's a nice story, filled with twist and turns. I am sensing that there is a typical junction coming. The bad guys are mostly dead, or will be soon enough. Max has his newly acquired family, both biological and adopted. Will this become the typical series where a new issue arises for the next season or will this be the happily ever after end?
person paul
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thankyou another great chapter next please
person RESCUE25
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
“The blizzard reveals many things” is the title. I would speculate that it could be taken more than one way. This is another "cliffhanger" that Mangus is known for. Fortunately not as nail biting as some of the previous ones. We will have to wait again for the next chapter for resolution.
Again well written.

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person paul
schedule September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yet another brilliant chapter please keep them comming
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
seems like max is going to Die eventually. He's come close so many times. The kid is mostly machine now, there isn't much left. Going to make him a bot just do it and move on. Of course amy will be pissed, she wont get pregnant.
person paul
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for another great chapter please keep them comming