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October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Relay like they would give the priest a loaded gun!
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October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the latest chapter. I hope that this cliffhanger is going to turn out go and that none of the original members die. Told you to kill the priest before. Did not trust him. Please give us another chapter quickly with a happy ending for everyone. If not is this the lead in to the next book. But keep up the good writing. And welcome back.
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October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter just like the rest of them. Now have to see how it turns out for Suzy and her mom. Will she stay or will they all come back to Max's place to live. Lets get more on the background of Rick. My thought is either Delta, Seals or Green Beret and maybe Rangers.
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October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW Again another great chapter. The best story by a great writer. Please keep the tory going. Thanks
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October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yet another brilliant chapter love this story and cant wait for the next chapter many many thanks. more please
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October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What we need here is some spice like an all out war with bodies dropping on both sides. All of Max's kids going full metal jacket Yelling "Vengeance, Death & Justice" well maybe some cake too.
Great chapter fangface the only good thing about your down time is it gets me thinking about writing. Oh wait I am.
But you better watch out as some here will demand a 4th book. :lol:
Great chapter fangface the only good thing about your down time is it gets me thinking about writing. Oh wait I am.
But you better watch out as some here will demand a 4th book. :lol:
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October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25 - Overall a good chapter. There hasn't been one that could be considered bad, in my single opinion. I am disappointed that you ruined the wedding with an attack. I think I understand why it was done, just think it might have been better if they had the event where nothing went wrong. They never seem to get those kind of times. I was disappointed that it was hyped up a bit and then it was a little lacking in flare given the potential of the virtual world. Though the service was nice.
I do like that you are bringing in a new face and a potential ally. I say potential because I have read all of the BITG and GITG and know that you have an ability to make it look one way and then do a quick reverse for the other. If GITG is going to make it to the same length as BITG Max is going to need more friends, other than the teen crowd filled up with nanites. They haven't had much of a role lately,even with the wedding they were barely mentioned. Anyway when it comes time they could step up he doesn't use them. This may change now they are all chipped. I will admit I laughed a little when the commissioner had the line about the spiders being creepy, brought back the times when the girls said that of Max.
I applaud the intimacy scene with Petra. First introducing a hermaphrodite was a great unexpected twist. But having Max be intimate with her was even better. Not many straight men would venture down that road. And it wasn't played off, he made sure to stimulate both sexes. It makes for an interesting sub plot in story. I am not sure about the whole daddy scene with Max. She seems to be looking at him as if he is more than a daddy figure, like most of the girls. Now she is going back to her mother. I have suspicions on where it may be going, but I have been wrong before. Like I said you have a knack for turning in a direction I couldn't think of.
Well, it was good. Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon.
I do like that you are bringing in a new face and a potential ally. I say potential because I have read all of the BITG and GITG and know that you have an ability to make it look one way and then do a quick reverse for the other. If GITG is going to make it to the same length as BITG Max is going to need more friends, other than the teen crowd filled up with nanites. They haven't had much of a role lately,even with the wedding they were barely mentioned. Anyway when it comes time they could step up he doesn't use them. This may change now they are all chipped. I will admit I laughed a little when the commissioner had the line about the spiders being creepy, brought back the times when the girls said that of Max.
I applaud the intimacy scene with Petra. First introducing a hermaphrodite was a great unexpected twist. But having Max be intimate with her was even better. Not many straight men would venture down that road. And it wasn't played off, he made sure to stimulate both sexes. It makes for an interesting sub plot in story. I am not sure about the whole daddy scene with Max. She seems to be looking at him as if he is more than a daddy figure, like most of the girls. Now she is going back to her mother. I have suspicions on where it may be going, but I have been wrong before. Like I said you have a knack for turning in a direction I couldn't think of.
Well, it was good. Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Loved the way that the spiders took care of the gangbangers. Can not wait for them to take on the rest of the gang members. Also the sheriff has to be brought down.. He was responsible for Max's problems in the jail. Good to see that the police commissioner is on Max's side (I hope) and hope that Petra finds her mother okay. Hope it is not the mother that the funeral is for. The could have a fake funeral for the Hans, that way the church woould not keep looking for him and still interfer with Max trying to save more abused children and teeen agers. Waiting for the next chapters in this story and Northstar.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Again another great chapter. I believe I will like what the police commissioner will do to the sheriff. The book keeps getting better and better. Thank you.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice touch "the twins followed with their hands in their backpacks". Probably better that they didn't have to pill them out in public even though they would have loved to. Now let's get on woth the wedding.
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