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November 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, we were all like "DA DA DA" at the end LOL. So what explodes first: Denise catches them, or Amy comes home and catches them, orrrrr does evil mommy catch them :O
Thanks for coming back, we missed you, was starting to get worried.
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October 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and I hope you finish it.
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May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Hope this is not all, you have a very addictive writing style and would love to read more. Thanx
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November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A lot of detailed sex with a VERY good story attached. Ch 17 was very emotional. I hope you will at least finish the story.
the budding art story, the scumbag mother & "friend". Along with the ongoing saga. Many loose ends of possible leads into more story.
the budding art story, the scumbag mother & "friend". Along with the ongoing saga. Many loose ends of possible leads into more story.
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November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading this great story.
Agreeded with Dirty Angel and Magus about how great a writer you are. Hope that you release more chapters to finish this story. Also yes Chapter 17 did bring more than one tear to my eyes. Was thinking about my mother, father and brother passing away and kepot asking also why them and not me. Was told that I had more to do before it was my time.
Agreeded with Dirty Angel and Magus about how great a writer you are. Hope that you release more chapters to finish this story. Also yes Chapter 17 did bring more than one tear to my eyes. Was thinking about my mother, father and brother passing away and kepot asking also why them and not me. Was told that I had more to do before it was my time.
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November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I just had to do this review. Magusfang has been reading your story to us and it's just amazing and this last chapter was so sad, I cried so much; thank you for writing it, it was beautiful.
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November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just had to add, because he'll never admit it, you put a tear in the big guy's eyes too, and that rarely happens! Great job :)
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June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I've read the complete story of Karen & Laci again and am completely captivated by the story and wish for more. Hoping all is well and more chapters of this story are in the works, so much of this story left unfinished. ThankYou
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March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story cannot wait till the next chpt. Magusfang was right about your writing you are truely gifted .
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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, Great work cant wait for the next chptr. Magusfang was right your quickly becoming a favorite.
Keep up the Great work.
Keep up the Great work.