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Maybe you should make a family tree for this series. I don't mean to bother, but I get confused a lot

another brilliant chapter don't know how you do it with your two main stories but im glad you do they are a real pleasure to read please keep them comming

WOW! The descriptive details really make the story. I'm really getting repetitious when I say your are very talented. The sex is just the icing on the cake and you don't eat the cake just for the icing.

B

Well then. I personally would say that chapter 7 was worth the wait! LOL But please do all of us (your followers) a favor and, not take so long with 8? ROFL Really am enjoying how you build up each character without reducing any that are already there!
And again, well done!!!!

Well Magusfang,I did,t think you could get any better but with chapter 6 you truely outdid yourself.I should mention that i,m not a writer but i,m what every writer loves and that,s a reader.keep them comming.And many thanks.Bob.

Honestly, I just want to know what happened to Amanda...I don't really like Anna, especially not teenage Anna, and I can hardly keep track of all the girls. I thought Nicki was Nick's daughter (come on, it's cute and it would make sense. But everyone is his freaking daughter, except the ones he has sex with..?) I liked TK as a favorite character in the beginning, but it switched to Amanda and I've been really attached to her since then; I love that TK loves her and fought for her to be remembered. It's not fair that someone who was so much a part of everyone's life is simply left alone and not spoken of. She deserves to be known. Suzy kind of annoys me- she's like a mix of TK and Amanda that sprouted up out of nowhere and rooted itself in the story. I suppose it also bothers me that she's there when Anna is married to Nick, and Anna was there when Nick was married to Amanda. I mean, what the fuck is the point of being married to one person if you're going to love and fuck a ton of other people? Just screwing other people is one thing, but love and sex is basically marriage, with compatibility and money thrown into the mix...(and the kids)

For all of you other fans of Magusfang's work (like me!), I thought I would let you know and post a link (with Magusfang's and the admin/moderator's permissions) to the forum thread where you can contact him with your thoughts and reviews! It is free to register (here on the archive side as well as the forum side) but not required to post comments and reviews for the authors on this site!
So, please let him know what you think so I'm not the only one? LOL

Magusfang's Corner thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/56684-magusfangs-corner/#entry353862

Another great chapter keep them coming!!!

Amazing similarities to bitg/gitg. I have a problem with so many players so references as to who is whose sister/child is very helpful. You are a masterful writer as many of your fan have told you. MY major complaint is that real life interfers with rapid posting of stories. The damn spam fighter is giving me a real headache.

B

Chapter 5
Magusfang, you really are a cruel writer!!! Releasing your stories one chapter at a time! If you published them as complete books I for one wouldn't be able to put it down until I finished it!
This is torture waiting for the next part!!!! LOL
For all of your fans sakes, PLEASE keep writing!!!! LOVE IT!!!