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for Northstar

by Magusfang

schedule January 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Waited a long time for this chapter and you did not let me down. Knowing that this is the past lifetime of Nick and the family I know that they survive the attack. Just do not know how many friends do not. Will have to wait for the next chapter. Hope not that long but will wait until you release the next update.

Keep up the good work. Still think that Max and Nick needs to meet up in the future or even in this timeframe. Hint Hint.
person RESCUE25
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Shades of GITG. Same story, different players, different venue but same story. That is a GOOD thing !! Thankfully not a cliffhanger: just anticipation.
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Like the love that everyone has for each other. I a free with Nick. This is the silver lining before the storm. It was nice about the rings the that he gfor them. Also liked the way that the security members greeting and made Sissy feel like one of the group.

Will be awaiting the next chapter with baited breath.

Keep up the great work.
person RESCUE25
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Nice to have a chapter without the nail biting cliffhanger. Guess Nick went to get a ring? Nah too simple and predictable.

B
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Liked the story so far. Just finished reading both 14 and 15. Can't wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to the wedding and going back to the birthday party. Keep up the good
work.
person paul
schedule September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
don't know how you do it but please keep on doing it a brilliant story
schedule September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok so now I'm officially addicted to two of your stories. Great writing as always. And cliffhangers too. You truly are and amazing writer. Keep up the great work hope it goes on for as many chapters as bitg.
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to release the next chapter of Northstar and coming home. Please do not let those two stories end up not being completed. You hav eme hooked on your stories. I have been reading your stories since chapter one of the boy in the grass. Can not wait for the stories to continue.
person towone1085
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You just keep getting better.The other site doesn't know what they lost.Keep up this fantastic story.Bob.
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Truly masterful Magus, I would love to peek at the notes sometime, but, don't really want to peek into your head since you pretty much write off the cuff. As far as a family tree, it's pretty well lined out in chapter 1, take notes on it, and it'll all work out. Chapter 1 was the overview, a lot of the rest are flashbacks, explaining who's who, and what happened. There's times we as readers need to take notes to keep it straight, just like Magus does to keep the stories straight, homework if you really want to follow and enjoy his epic series, and i mean that as plural because it seems most of us are keeping up with all three he's strapped himself with. Ty Magus, yet again, leaving us all wanting more, and checking back often.