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After repeated distractions, and weeks of not being able to read it, plus losing my place for a while, I finally finished it. Yay! Off to read the next one, woo!

Oh my god, that's all I'm saying because urrgghh...

Okay so I have to admit that I quit reading when I actually found out you not only shot June but let her die! OMG I was pissed but then I gave it a couple of days of thinking and decided that I could go on without June but then you bring her back! Have you no heart, to play with people's emotions like that? Fine, I get it you can play god all you want.

I'm half way through it now so you better start writing before I catch up and have to start bugging you for updates. Like every five minutes you'll get 'are you gonna update today magus, huh, huh, you gonna update??'

Anyway, are they gonna kill a bunch of people when they try to mess with the 'family'. I see them kind of like the mob now because of that. Oh well guess I still have a lot to read so I better get back to it.

Oh and before I forget, from what I've read in your thread (I try to stay away from spoilers but sometimes I get a little bit of one) I know that you add people to the main group but if I was Emma, I'd be punching any girl other than the other four family members that even gave Max a sideways glance, just saying.

CL

I can't believe you let her get shot!! :p

I really enjoyed your story. I understand why you removed it from the previous site. It took a little bit of searching to find the final chapter. I have three comments to make: 1. When Alice was listing all of Tan's injuries, unless he would have had to have serious massive lower abdomen injures to have crushed testes. Until he reaches puberty, they would remain inside and drop down into his scrotum then. 2. You kind of left out what happened to all of the other kids that were rescued. 3. You never did say what happened to Tan in the pod.

Maybe these questions will be answered in girl in the grass.

great story cant wait for the rest and the conclusion

when I first saw the title to this story I skipped it thinking I wouldn't like it. then on night I was bored and decided I would read the first little bit just to see what it was. after the first paragraph I couldn't stop reading it. once I figured out magusfang's schedule (roughly) I started checking when I knew he would post. I was mad when his stories stop being posted on the other site because it was at a pivotal point in the story and then with some help I found him on this site. this is a great story and it has everything sex, sci-fi, love, good guys and bad guys. keep up the good work

Patiently, but, eagerly await book 2, it sucks when rl gets in the way of our reading, but, until more are posted, i'll gladly keep re reading this series, as well as future chapters in Northstar.

The beginning of a WONDERFUL series of adventures.

BdeEi

COMEON please don't leave us at this juncture. We need at least a chapter 64. Or will Girl in the grass pick up where Bpy left off? Glad to see that you got the entire series migrated. This site is much more difficult to find stories on than the other one. THANK YOU very much for providing info on your new home. Was trying to get signed into the other one to be able to PM you.

B