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May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. And I hope you include more (hand) spanking scenes, with greater details. I love when Cyan gets lightly disciplined in public, like having to stand with his face to the wall (swatting would be great too), as clearly it's an environment in which it is tolerated and he isn't going to be humiliated or attacked for it. Also, I'm impressed with how prolific you are!
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May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Seems you already fixed the anonymous reader thing since I can review now^^ thanks a lot!!!! I toally loved those two chapters!!!! The punishment was so hot!!!!! I really want to know why cyan freaked and used the safe word he didn't want to use^^ and the way Anita handeled the subdrop was really professional^^ I really love this story and can't wait for more!!!!! See you again soon!!!
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like your story so far and your Dragon Elf boy, look forward to reading more! G
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, usually, I go for stories with more hits and more chapters, but the nicely-named title and description drew me here.
It can't be easy to attract readers at the start since there are so many others.
Glad I read it, story looks good, please keep it up! ^__^
I don't usually post either, but a little encouragement may get me a new chap quicker hahaha...!
It can't be easy to attract readers at the start since there are so many others.
Glad I read it, story looks good, please keep it up! ^__^
I don't usually post either, but a little encouragement may get me a new chap quicker hahaha...!
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really really love this story!!! I would have reviewed earlyier but you disabled anonymous reviews and since I can't login to my account with my smartphone it had to wait. Maybe you could enable anonymous reviews since probably many have the same problem^^ Anyway on to the story^^ I really like your main chars and I can't wait to see where the BDSM in this story will go!!! I loved how Cyan got all protective when his new 'master' was 'attaced'^^ I can't wait to see what the punishment will be *leers evily* Please update really soon!!!!
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
2 in a day, I'm on roll! Decided to check AFF again before the nights over. Glad I did...!
WOW, updated so fast! Thank you!
I love how we get both POVs and both is in 1st person. (Another thing I like- stories in 1st person narrative.)
Its a refreshing change how Tamas is weaker than Cyan but Cyan is the submissive here.
Its cool how you managed to combine elf and dragon together for a character. Tamas being an empath makes it even better.
(Also nice that your story doesn't have a bunch of typos or punctuation errors or things like that, you might think I'm a picky since it's not like I'm writing in proper perfect English, but sometimes if it's not 1 or 2 mistakes, like if its literally in every paragraph, it tends to get annoying...)
Before you asked if the chapters are a decent length. They are perfect, especially with at the speed you're updating. If you were to have that as your update-of-the-month... then ....
SO, yup, chapter length is great! I always vote for shorter chapters with regular updates over a really nice long lengthy chapter but only updated once every 2 weeks or worse... a month. If you have a REALLLLY long chapter written up, I totally vote for splitting it in 2 at a good part and posting the 2nd part a few days later. (Of course if you have mad-writer skills/brains, and can churn out daily updates, even better! hahaha.... but personally, I've never thought weekly updates were too long in between updates.)
WOW, updated so fast! Thank you!
I love how we get both POVs and both is in 1st person. (Another thing I like- stories in 1st person narrative.)
Its a refreshing change how Tamas is weaker than Cyan but Cyan is the submissive here.
Its cool how you managed to combine elf and dragon together for a character. Tamas being an empath makes it even better.
(Also nice that your story doesn't have a bunch of typos or punctuation errors or things like that, you might think I'm a picky since it's not like I'm writing in proper perfect English, but sometimes if it's not 1 or 2 mistakes, like if its literally in every paragraph, it tends to get annoying...)
Before you asked if the chapters are a decent length. They are perfect, especially with at the speed you're updating. If you were to have that as your update-of-the-month... then ....
SO, yup, chapter length is great! I always vote for shorter chapters with regular updates over a really nice long lengthy chapter but only updated once every 2 weeks or worse... a month. If you have a REALLLLY long chapter written up, I totally vote for splitting it in 2 at a good part and posting the 2nd part a few days later. (Of course if you have mad-writer skills/brains, and can churn out daily updates, even better! hahaha.... but personally, I've never thought weekly updates were too long in between updates.)
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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I would suggest doing a proof read before posting though as I saw some spelling errors. However, posting twice in one day totally makes up for that. I can't wait for more!