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person Roya7
schedule May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
^_^

These two have a long way to go ... :)

Thank for the update xoxo
person wolfluv
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well great now I need tissues because I feel bad for Yuki! other than that I'm totally digging this story! read ya laters!
person Blur
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story shows potential!
person Roya7
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! It was good that I checked the third chapter again and saw that you had added to it. Maybe now Hajime make some changes in his behavior towards Y! It's interesting to watch/read how they are going from hating each other to loving each other! :D

and I really like it the way you keep everything according to old traditional Japanese culture. As an anime geek ^_^ I am really interested in Japan and it's traditions so I am double enjoying your story! :3

So please update soon again and thanksss xoxo
person zas
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, omg that husband of his is so selfish why did he tell people not to befriend him, I hate that guy lol thanks for the update.
person Nbsiren
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Hajime will hold back his temper when Yukihisa wakes up.
person Roya7
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh that was an awful cliffhanger! I hope you are going to update soon!?!? :D
This is an interesting fiction I can't wait to read more ;)
person zas
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice u added more detail to the story, can't wait for the next chapter
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like this story! I would love to have a description of what Hajime and Yukihisa look like, i.e., height, hair color, eyes, etc. Great start and look forward to reading more. I have a feeling that Hajime is going to be upset with Yukihisa for getting hit in the head and knocked out by a basketball. He will probably see it as bringing shame to the family name.
person Franz
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was good!!!! Please update soon.