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November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I'm totally digging this so far.
I like Fox. He's funny.
Your story has the perfect way of making something as mundane as going to a party and going to school funny as hell.
I'm enjoying myself :)
off to the next chapter, I do like me some Rugged Fallen Angels who look delicious in formal attire lol
I like Fox. He's funny.
Your story has the perfect way of making something as mundane as going to a party and going to school funny as hell.
I'm enjoying myself :)
off to the next chapter, I do like me some Rugged Fallen Angels who look delicious in formal attire lol
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
She's a pit bull and Fox couldn't see her attacking anyone???? lol Just kidding! I had a pit bull and she was the sweetest, most lovable dog ever. I'm not creative with pet names. My lab's name is Jessie. Boring, huh?
I do remember in the original that Tom wasn't such an asshole. lol And I actually forgot about Mr. McAbrahams getting shot. It's too bad - he seemed like a nice guy.
I like how you named the characters: Tom and Brady, like Tom Brady. lol
I'm looking forward to the next update, Lepid! Hopefully Tom can keep Fox alive! :)
I do remember in the original that Tom wasn't such an asshole. lol And I actually forgot about Mr. McAbrahams getting shot. It's too bad - he seemed like a nice guy.
I like how you named the characters: Tom and Brady, like Tom Brady. lol
I'm looking forward to the next update, Lepid! Hopefully Tom can keep Fox alive! :)
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September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha wow things sure did have an unexpected change, I did not see any of this coming. As for the dog name since it's a pit bull you should give it an innocent name like Sophie, haha just for the irony. I like this story, a lot.
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July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! What the hell was Fox doing drinking so much after Miles told him to go get Mellow Yellow?? What an idiot! lol
And where the hell was Miles when that guy was throwing Fox down the stairs?
And who recognized Fox? The hot teacher?
Awesome, awesome update, Lepid!! As usual! :)
And where the hell was Miles when that guy was throwing Fox down the stairs?
And who recognized Fox? The hot teacher?
Awesome, awesome update, Lepid!! As usual! :)
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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
how did I miss this story?!!? So glad I clicked on it! I adore the characters! Melvin with his giant eyes, Good guy Miles, ahhh yiss. I am quite addicted now and am looking forward to the next chapter!! I hope you update soon :)
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June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lepid, I have no idea why you're not getting bombarded with reviews. I LOVE this version of the story! Well, this new version. I did love the other two also. lol
The whole scene in the janitor's closet was funny - unpaid parking tickets. lol
I'm glad Miles is cool with Fox (even though he already pretty much knew). I'm surprised about Amy; I didn't see that one coming! Although I thought in the original Miles already knew about Fox...
The whole scene in the janitor's closet was funny - unpaid parking tickets. lol
I'm glad Miles is cool with Fox (even though he already pretty much knew). I'm surprised about Amy; I didn't see that one coming! Although I thought in the original Miles already knew about Fox...
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June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story. Especially loving Miles he's such a goofball and a great friend. Keep up the good work!
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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, the 2005 reference - is that when "Stacy's Mom" came out? lol
There were so many funny parts in this chapter, I can't think of all of them but I found myself laughing so much. :)
Miles' parents are very young to have an eighteen-year-old. They must have had him when they were the same age or a bit older. Even if they were thirty-nine, they would have had him when they were twenty-one. Very young.
Anyway...terrific chapter, Lepid! :) I love Mellow Yellow's shyness and McAbrams (shit, that wasn't his name, was it?), coolness about what he saw/heard in the bathroom.
Can't wait for chapter four! :)
There were so many funny parts in this chapter, I can't think of all of them but I found myself laughing so much. :)
Miles' parents are very young to have an eighteen-year-old. They must have had him when they were the same age or a bit older. Even if they were thirty-nine, they would have had him when they were twenty-one. Very young.
Anyway...terrific chapter, Lepid! :) I love Mellow Yellow's shyness and McAbrams (shit, that wasn't his name, was it?), coolness about what he saw/heard in the bathroom.
Can't wait for chapter four! :)
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May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to ask in my review: I thought in the original story that Miles knew that Fox was gay? Maybe I just didn't remember it right.
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May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I found this story! I'm loving this so much! :)
This is a story about Fox and Mr. Case, right? Or not? Well, I like Melvin too. So I hope whatever happens, that won't destroy Fox and and Melvins relationship even as a friend. And I wonder if Miles is really a homophobic? I think I just have to wait and find out how he's going to react about it then.
Looking forward for the next chapter! :)
This is a story about Fox and Mr. Case, right? Or not? Well, I like Melvin too. So I hope whatever happens, that won't destroy Fox and and Melvins relationship even as a friend. And I wonder if Miles is really a homophobic? I think I just have to wait and find out how he's going to react about it then.
Looking forward for the next chapter! :)