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Oh, oh, what a good chapter. I loved how Yumi and Ami settled at least part of their revenge against Grace before they were interrupted. Grace deserves to be treated as the lowest of all slaves and should not be allowed any luxuries. I wish chapters were longer or updates faster since they are so short.

I was a little confused as to what's going on but guess it's some sort of role playing between Svetlana and the The red Amazon. I am not sure though if it was planned as a way to punish Grace. I hope Mistress Juliana still gets mad at Grace often and bites her as well as punishes her in wicked ways!

I don't think Grace or the other slaves deserve to live in such luxury either. They are slaves and shouldn't deserve such lavish quarters. They even get a computer! Seriously! No wonder why Grace already loves her new life and doesn't and enjoys what is being done to her, I would too!

Oh, I've been thinking of some ideas to throw your way to torture Grace, LOL.

I would love seeing Mistress Juliana keep Grace naked all the time with only a collar, cuffs, nipple clamps, some sort of cage with contraptions that will fill her pussy and butt hole all the time. Different assortments of dildidos that will keep her mouth and other orfices stuffed. Brand Grace somehow with a mark of ownership. Body piercings too on her clit, nipples, and anywhere else you can think of would be cool. Make her crawl around like a dog by binding her legs and arms, fingers/toes maybe by using some sort of mitts. Use some sort of electric shock treatments or stimulus on her. Let her also be used by all the other slaves anyway they want to play with her. I would love to see her try and escape then get caught and then punished.

I got excited thinking you had updated a new chapter so was a little bit disappointed you hadn't but I did enjoy learning all the other stuff. It was neat and explained a lot of interesting things. I am excited to find out what kind of slave Grace will be trained to be. I know beastiality is not everyone's cup of tea but I love it. Dogs, horses, pigs, cows, you name it the more the better, lol. I would love more of description of Grace including height, body weight, breast size, etc.

I also will love reading your novella Origins but only after you finish this one first. I hope this particular story is novel length too and that Grace doesn't fall in love with Mistress Juliana or ever learn to love her new role in life.

Please get writing and update soon!

Good story! I like it.

Thanks for updating! I love that she is fighting and hopes she continues to and not give in because I love seeing her get punished, lol.

Oh my gosh! I love stories like this! Please update regularly and make it nice and kinky too! I love bondage stuff. I hope she keeps getting into trouble so that she has to be punished regularly.

This sounds like a repost

YOOO man i better continue its a gd story

please wright more!!! i read this story over and over again....and it alwayz makes me horny!! GAHH!!