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for Innocence Lost

by MadameDouleur

person Anonymous
schedule December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Is this story discontinued or just on hiatus?

person Anon
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year! Where are you? I would love to read more of Grace's story and also Marie and her Daddy too! Hope to see you around again real soon.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
"Hail to the Chief!"

Who knew, right? lol.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Update! Yeah!

I guess Grace needs a break once in a while from all the other fun stuff, lol. Marjory was a nice interlude and Grace enjoyed it plus wasn't hurt or anything.

I am sort of wondering what Tsumi meant about "We’ll be paired sooner than later and then you’re going to regret ever getting kidnapped.”

I certainly can't wait to find out!
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Ouch, that must have hurt like hell! Poor Grace, lol, not she needed to be punished for being a bad slave. I sure could have used some of that ice today and definitely will need it tomorrow! I wonder if Grace would want to share some with me......

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, what a juicy chapter but poor Grace really got filled, LOL.

More please.
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very nice chapter! I know many readers don't like to read Beastiality stories and there are hardly any posted here but me does, LOL. I liked Duke. Maybe, he will visit Grace again and bring some of his furry friends with him to meet her.

I still think Grace is allowed too much luxury and a Jacuzzi tub? See what I mean!

She is a sex slave and should not be allowed these things. She should not be allowed to touch or pleasure herself either. She should have an attendant who seeds to her needs except when Mistress calls on her.

Good chapter!
person Trinket
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Depends. If she's a foreign sex slave and considering this is done among the wealthiest. I assume she would be in a jaccuzzi relaxing. It really depends on where the Author wants it to go. It's easy to write despicable stuff, but not easy pull something interesting out of it. There's always a build up in there. For example, the mistress could be a deviant when it comes down to sex and could favour certain individuals. Readers don't feel pity when bad things happen to bad people but they do feel really bad when bad things happen to good people. In these type of stories, it's always interesting to play with both sides. We usually have one mean slave that deserves almost everything, it's spoiled, it's arrogant, it committed a crime and so on and then we have unfortunate ones, like Grace. Usually weak willed and emmotionally scarred, they never break. Because when they do break...they kill themselves.

I kinda like Grace. She's a good person at heart and I think Juliana knows this. Her docility works well and the mistress really seems to like her. Otherwise, Juliana wouldn't be so obssessed in this particular case. Maybe Grace reminds her of someone she held dear? Also, Grace should listen to Tsumi when it comes to horrific stuff if, and I said if, Grace really wants know. Then again, making Grace terrified would sadden her mistress. Then againm what does Juliana want from Grace? At first it seemed a simple slave but then, things didn't seem quite like like it. There was a preference and then there was an envy from her clients when Grace openly admitted she Juliana was her Miss and the other slaves, for reasons never discussed, do have a beef with her even though Grace never did anything. Some sought pleasure, others came for revenge and stayed out of comfort so.

Ah, she's an angel. That's all I have to say. Lilith herself would drag her to hell just so she could merely gaze her figure.
I liked the "pure" and "deviant" thing you in here. You just want to, "grrr" make Grace cry just so she can nuzzle herself onto you for confort.
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please torture Grace more, tie her up like a hog, use all sorts of crazy toys/instruments on her. Zap her tits, pussy and ass.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I hope Grace's punishment continues. She deserves it and shouldn't be allowed back to her room but kept in the dungeon.